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Cloudshill

The Rose

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A rose has bloomed for you today

And yellow is it's colour

As splendid as the thought of you

A rose upon an alter

For me to be.....across the sea

To see you all again

Is for me....a dream to be

To see my lovely friends

Just like this rose...my memories glow

Like sunshine from above

Filled with scenes....of things I've seen

In a land that I did love

And in that land....where I did stand

A family of four friends

Just you three,,,,,were there with me

And grace was in the wind

So now I learn....I must return

To be with you again

And to be....with family

To those who took me in

So now I wake....make no mistake

The flower surely grows

And now I bend....to see my friend

And gently stroke the rose

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I do love roses.

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~ the rose arose ... and I am bent no more .... ~

pureness flowing in the veins ol'chap ...

~i bow~

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If you recite some of your verse Cloudsy, you wont need roses. Lovely.

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I had to listen to this one several times. It's very touching.

Kudos Cloudshill.

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Touching.. it is certainly graceful like a rose. Well written. :yes:

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Thank you Hilander....I do too

I bow to you as well Third Eye.

"And to Miss T......this rose is free"...ty....

theSOURSE.....your words are very kind....thank you so much..

and AliveInDeath....indeed, they are beautiful and graceful, just like my friends......thank you very much....

Roses for everybody........ :)

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Your poem is lovely. :) I've read it several times over and each time I think to myself, I wish I could write poems like you do, you have such a gift of expressing yourself, it's so beautiful.

I like roses, your rose garden is very pretty. My dad loved roses too and used to grow them with lots of tlc, my mum still has a few left in the garden but they're not nearly as good as when my dad was alive.

Roses for everybody........ :)

Thank you very much.....and for the memories too :wub:

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Thank you very much Still Waters..............you are a rose...... :yes:

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can almost smell roses from my screen :D

great poem man

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loved the flow of verse

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Thanks Knight of Shadows (lol)........it smells.......yellow....... :D

Thank you for your kind words Armchair Educated.......I like your dog too....... :)

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