Cloudshill Posted May 3, 2013 #1 Share Posted May 3, 2013 (edited) A rose has bloomed for you today And yellow is it's colour As splendid as the thought of you A rose upon an alter For me to be.....across the sea To see you all again Is for me....a dream to be To see my lovely friends Just like this rose...my memories glow Like sunshine from above Filled with scenes....of things I've seen In a land that I did love And in that land....where I did stand A family of four friends Just you three,,,,,were there with me And grace was in the wind So now I learn....I must return To be with you again And to be....with family To those who took me in So now I wake....make no mistake The flower surely grows And now I bend....to see my friend And gently stroke the rose Edited May 3, 2013 by Cloudshill 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashotep Posted May 3, 2013 #2 Share Posted May 3, 2013 I do love roses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted May 3, 2013 #3 Share Posted May 3, 2013 ~ the rose arose ... and I am bent no more .... ~ pureness flowing in the veins ol'chap ... ~i bow~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted May 3, 2013 #4 Share Posted May 3, 2013 If you recite some of your verse Cloudsy, you wont need roses. Lovely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theSOURCE Posted May 3, 2013 #5 Share Posted May 3, 2013 I had to listen to this one several times. It's very touching. Kudos Cloudshill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xYlvax Posted May 3, 2013 #6 Share Posted May 3, 2013 Touching.. it is certainly graceful like a rose. Well written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted May 4, 2013 Author #7 Share Posted May 4, 2013 Thank you Hilander....I do too I bow to you as well Third Eye. "And to Miss T......this rose is free"...ty.... theSOURSE.....your words are very kind....thank you so much.. and AliveInDeath....indeed, they are beautiful and graceful, just like my friends......thank you very much.... Roses for everybody........ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted May 5, 2013 #8 Share Posted May 5, 2013 Your poem is lovely. I've read it several times over and each time I think to myself, I wish I could write poems like you do, you have such a gift of expressing yourself, it's so beautiful. I like roses, your rose garden is very pretty. My dad loved roses too and used to grow them with lots of tlc, my mum still has a few left in the garden but they're not nearly as good as when my dad was alive. Roses for everybody........ Thank you very much.....and for the memories too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted May 7, 2013 Author #9 Share Posted May 7, 2013 Thank you very much Still Waters..............you are a rose...... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted May 10, 2013 #10 Share Posted May 10, 2013 can almost smell roses from my screen great poem man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ever Learning Posted May 10, 2013 #11 Share Posted May 10, 2013 loved the flow of verse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted May 11, 2013 Author #12 Share Posted May 11, 2013 Thanks Knight of Shadows (lol)........it smells.......yellow....... Thank you for your kind words Armchair Educated.......I like your dog too....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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