moe eubleck Posted October 23, 2004 #1 Share Posted October 23, 2004 (edited) Avast and be warned. The great and powerful Kismit has requested a creative outlet for the Moe. But Moe is not allowed to jest on this outlet. This will be a challenge. But it can be done . For Moe is mighty and wholesome. But he must sit on the sidelines for this one and let Kevin take the wheels. In exchange, Kismit shall teach Moe much jazzy trivia, so that he will grow wise. all poetry written by Moe Eubleck on this forum : © 2004 Kevin Baker Edited October 29, 2004 by moe eubleck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 23, 2004 Author #2 Share Posted October 23, 2004 "ammit" the shady window frame hides our intentions but from within we are watching her, tending her plowed earth with a three pronged dagger self proclaimed druidess goddess of the till Pomona , Lady orchard. divinely hands upon her lovely hips. tossing hair on golden sunlight such cruelty painted on her face but realization strikes down divination for when the rains fall and the make up runs, her sports utility vehicle speeds away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted October 23, 2004 #3 Share Posted October 23, 2004 We think these are pretty swell, Moe. I'll critique when you've posted more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted October 23, 2004 #4 Share Posted October 23, 2004 Moe is is indeed mighty and wholesome, but Kevin is pretty groovy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 23, 2004 Author #5 Share Posted October 23, 2004 here is a copy of the poem I posted ages ago. This is what first betrayed my inner seriousness to Kismit. I did not like this one. it tells of desperation. "venus " She spreads like dark wine though my viens she is organized despair, swallowing my doubts in a drop of blood but lets get aquainted first my love breath me your name I want to taste it when you speak. In the silence before our little death will you pin me on the cold tiles? lift my head by the roots , your name is warmth in my ear. breathe it once again. now dig your talons into me, so we may die together through clenched teeth. it has been so long, my love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doomgirl Posted October 24, 2004 #6 Share Posted October 24, 2004 Moe has much skill when writing verse yay Moe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kismit Posted October 25, 2004 #7 Share Posted October 25, 2004 (edited) Thank-you Moe , I shall attempt to keep up my side of the bargain , I have quite a resource though .. ...................... Payment for moetry poetry .....(part 1) Great Britain's King John (11199_1216) had a servant whose official job it was to hold the King's head if he became sea sick ..... Edit : It's good , I still like the other one more though ... more please . Edited October 25, 2004 by Kismit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 25, 2004 Author #8 Share Posted October 25, 2004 " minerva " laundry day. a fallen secret from side hollow found shall we interrogate such illumination ? unresistable propaganda tiptoe-stairway creaky-hindged-entry upon cold morning bedsheets do we confront our mistress Cardea, Lady Protectress devourer of souls swallower of pink innocence lost in the silence before the song began, the air was golden, shimmering. but the song was deception golden, shimmering my minerva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kismit Posted October 25, 2004 #9 Share Posted October 25, 2004 (edited) very sad Moe . It is interesting to note that Minerva was also the first name of Proffesor Mcgonogal a much loved character of the Harry potter series . Edited October 28, 2004 by Kismit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 27, 2004 Author #10 Share Posted October 27, 2004 (edited) dont sleep with my fishes this is my lee shore its been dangerous too long rudderless heart of mine Edited August 16, 2005 by moe eubleck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFarGone Posted October 27, 2004 #11 Share Posted October 27, 2004 Wow moe, I never thought that you could write as serious and thoughtful as sum of these. Exspeccially Venus. Nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted October 27, 2004 #12 Share Posted October 27, 2004 Very sad Moe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted October 28, 2004 #13 Share Posted October 28, 2004 Moe's poetry is better than mine. Much jealousy do I feel this night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kismit Posted October 28, 2004 #14 Share Posted October 28, 2004 I am trivia-less. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girty1600 Posted October 28, 2004 #15 Share Posted October 28, 2004 (edited) great poems, Moe. Edited November 11, 2004 by girty1600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFarGone Posted October 28, 2004 #16 Share Posted October 28, 2004 GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But this is Moes place. I suggest posting in Poem Place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 29, 2004 Author #17 Share Posted October 29, 2004 " murmur " intermittently amorous murmurs , ease our recent fragmentation. but roofless , preacarious, intoxication has easy access Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 29, 2004 Author #18 Share Posted October 29, 2004 (edited) "alibi" morning coffee knocks off the lid of my weariness this new frame of mind shows pastel pinups abroad but do we know any better ? years of dusty still life with beer mug and fruit we are conditioned in a frozen semblance of surrender an oil painting we brush over her atroicity hide them under new color on canvas. a new skin to mask the old aberration of forgiveness oh, devine. perhaps this is why the little frenchman wears his hand in a sling. love me or hate me but spare me your indifference Edited October 29, 2004 by moe eubleck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted October 29, 2004 #19 Share Posted October 29, 2004 Dude, that was the best one so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted October 29, 2004 #20 Share Posted October 29, 2004 I agree with snuffs. This one really struck a chord. love me or hate me but spare me your indifference Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted October 29, 2004 Author #21 Share Posted October 29, 2004 we thank you for your kind words. Accoustic Voice...... yes we will work on this . stay posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kismit Posted October 30, 2004 #22 Share Posted October 30, 2004 Yay!! Did you know: a man by the name of Joseph Campbell once said, "The privilege of a lifetime is being who you are." I had no idea Napolean painted . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted November 1, 2004 Author #23 Share Posted November 1, 2004 "acoustic voice" confessional booth silhouettes , trace the chalk outline of her sin acoustic hail mary incantations her best defense outside the choir chants, descending blanket of the acoustic convict. pit and pendulum. this life a prison. a murder of crows to search after the flood acoustic providence in the hands of saintly hallow condemned to thirst my goddess Morrigan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted November 1, 2004 #24 Share Posted November 1, 2004 We groove to this greatly, Moe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saRa Posted November 1, 2004 #25 Share Posted November 1, 2004 (edited) awesome poems Edited November 1, 2004 by saRa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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