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Rose

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Rose

The snow is falling,

over the treetops the wind is calling

A white blanket covering the ground,

spreading magic all around

Can you hear

like angels soothing your fear

Can you see

the person who is reaching out to me

Can you feel

that everything you touch is real

Under the snow,

there's something that may not show

Soft under your fingers,

a scent that still lingers

Something that will forever be growing

Like a friendship always flowing

Sometimes it will hurt you,

no matter what you do

Through pain

Everlasting rain

Comes something more sweet,

that no one can ever defeat

The beauty of the rose,

is what brings us close

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Impressive...

I don't normaly leave remarks about poems, but yours I have because it stirs something in me. It's easy to read and easy to understand. You have a great gift with words! yes.gif

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It's really good! The flow of words is beautiful. thumbsup.gif

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Roses are my favourite flower and that poem makes the rose even more beautiful.

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Awww thank you guys!

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That is very nice. original.gif I see you're from Sweden? Is English your native tongue or are you writing this in a second language?

(I'm always green with envy over people who can write in more than one language. I know snatches of half a dozen, but asking for directions to the loo is about my limit in any of them. huh.gif)

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Heh, english is my second language. Swedish is my native. I studied english from first grade though and i love writing...so yah...tongue.gif thanx though!

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