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thefirstman

My song's poems and general stuff

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Hey just thought i should share my garbage with y'all:

this is a song i re-designed the lyrics of an already existing song its not finished yet but here you are.Let me know what you think..

How long are you gonna keep playin me this way?

I just wanna stay,hold you arms,

Now i just think that iv been pushed away,

swept away,all alone.

Why dont you hear when i cry out to you?

are you even there,why am i so scared?

Now it just seems like time has passed me by,

left me crying,left me lying here

the song is kinda slow,iv yet to finish it and present it at practice,let me know what you think so far.ill get back to you with more stuff when i have written it.

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That was very good

I hope your band turnes out to be a great success thumbsup.gif

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Thanks man,much appreciated thumbsup.gif

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You keep up like that and people will be buying your records in no time.

Personally though, I think you should be the one to sing it! tongue.gif

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