Kissmet Posted January 19, 2009 #1 Share Posted January 19, 2009 (edited) I just recently took up the hobby of scrapbloging and though it would be an interesting new way of posting my writings as well. This poem is actually sort of a sequel of a poem I wrote with the same title. I do recommend that you read the fist poem I wrote for you to be able to fully understand what this new poem conveys. I hope you guys like it, not just the poem but the way it has been presented via scrapbooking. Here is the link to the first poem I wrote: Love Story of an Oak Tree I And here is the new poem: Visit My Website By: Jenny Edited January 19, 2009 by Kissmet31 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hissie Sola Posted January 19, 2009 #2 Share Posted January 19, 2009 Great job! It's a good sequel, very emotional. I like the scrapblog idea too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted January 19, 2009 #3 Share Posted January 19, 2009 Well done Kissmet!....It follows up the original nicely. What an interesting chain of stories. They belong in a scrapbook of memories. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kissmet Posted January 20, 2009 Author #4 Share Posted January 20, 2009 Great job! It's a good sequel, very emotional. I like the scrapblog idea too Thanks Mr. Siggy. I have grown addicted to scrap booking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kissmet Posted January 20, 2009 Author #5 Share Posted January 20, 2009 Well done Kissmet!....It follows up the original nicely. What an interesting chain of stories. They belong in a scrapbook of memories. Thanks Cloudy. Glad you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kissmet Posted January 23, 2009 Author #6 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Just thought I'd post the first poem here, to make things more simple. > The Love Story of an Oak tree I Dressed all in black, I walk barefoot up the hill. I feel the grass tickle my feet. I breathe in a lung full of flower-scent in the air as a bunny shaped cloud blocked the sun. I look for the tree where we used to carve our names. It’s been over a year since I have been here, too scared to come back feeling that the past will haunt me again. I see the sturdy oak tree with our swing and I see our names inside a heart etched so deeply. This was our tree. I waited for him to come back and meet me here. That was 15 months and 3 days ago, which really felt more like 15 lifetimes and 3 eternities. I waited until the sun has long set, long after the sky has stopped raining. But never did he come. I thought his love was stronger than that, but he proved me wrong. I step closer to our tree, my fingers tracing the lines of our names. Tracing the words we have promised each other. Then I came across something unfamiliar. I read my name, and I read what it said next: “look for the message in a bottle” Our tree’s trunk served as our treasure chest with love letters and souvenirs. We used to love to leave each other messages in a bottle. I reached in and felt a bottle, my hands were shaking. Inside was a paper scrolled up. My heart was racing and I felt a lump on my throat. I read what was written: My Dear Angel, I’m sorry if I was not able to come for you that day. I had my heart made up; all my bags were packed to run away and marry you. But on the way to our hill, our tree, something stopped me. I did not come because I loved you any less, but because I love you so much. I know it may not make sense but I don’t want you to waste your life for the short of a life I have left. I know I cannot give you forever; I can only give you what God has intended for me to stay in this world. So as hard as it is I could not take your promise of forever knowing it will be spent mourning over me. As weak as my heart already is, it can’t take that. I hope someday you will forgive me. I had to break your heart; at least I know it can still be mended. But if I leave you and this world and your heart dies with me then it would only prove that I am selfish. I returned to our tree wishing that someday your feet would lead you back to our place and read this, and as you do I want you to know that I will love you for what ever life I have left. Yours Forever, Joshua I almost dropped to my knees. I am choking with tears, crying like a baby. Here I am dressed all in black, coming from Joshua’s funeral, with a red rose in my hand. I place the rose on the foot of our tree. I looked up and a raindrop fell on my cheek. Could that be his tear? I whispered, hoping my voice would reach the heaven. “Rest in peace my love; thank you for making me a part of your life. I will love you for the rest of mine”. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted January 23, 2009 #7 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Lovely Kissy, great work Great idea...scrapblogging Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swtp Posted January 23, 2009 #8 Share Posted January 23, 2009 Wow this is soooo beautiful and brought tears to my eyes! Great work hun, and i love the new presentation! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kissmet Posted January 24, 2009 Author #9 Share Posted January 24, 2009 Lovely Kissy, great work Great idea...scrapblogging Thanks Chicky, I love scrapblogging. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kissmet Posted January 24, 2009 Author #10 Share Posted January 24, 2009 Wow this is soooo beautiful and brought tears to my eyes! Great work hun, and i love the new presentation! Aww thanks.. sorry it made you cry though. But I'm sorta glad it did, only means that it evokes emotions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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