DrStrangelove Posted June 15, 2004 #1 Share Posted June 15, 2004 (edited) Ok, I usually wouldn't do anything like this so please be nice about any criticisms. It's rather abstract (like most thins I write, draw, or enjoy) so if you're not the biggest fan of abstract stuff you probably wouldn' ike this. It's called Insomnia... For some strange reason beyond myself I cannot seem to fall asleep I lay in bed, things come to my head And visions come to me I see puzzle pieces yet to exist see days since now passed I see sunshine rays, and lumps of hate I see the cure for the mass For some strange reason beyond myself Sleep is hiding from me I hear these noices, and whispering voices From creatures I do not see They are hiding deep within my closit They are hiding in my drawers They are under my bed, and they are in my head Living in the creature lores What des everyone think? Should I just stick with Bigfoot and UFOs? Edited June 15, 2004 by DrStrangelove Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chicken dance Posted June 15, 2004 #2 Share Posted June 15, 2004 Well do you want me to be honest? I thought it was really good . I honestly think you should write more. I would read your stuff if you posted more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imorningsun Posted June 15, 2004 #3 Share Posted June 15, 2004 Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrStrangelove Posted June 15, 2004 Author #4 Share Posted June 15, 2004 Hooray. So far good reviews! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OneEye Posted June 21, 2004 #5 Share Posted June 21, 2004 What kind of music would you want it to? It would be good with about anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrStrangelove Posted June 24, 2004 Author #6 Share Posted June 24, 2004 I would definitly put it to electronica music. I have done that kind of music before. It's kind of like what Trent Reznor does when he makes NIN's music. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OneEye Posted June 24, 2004 #7 Share Posted June 24, 2004 Niiiiiiice... I could see linkin Park doing that song, too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloud_Strife Posted June 26, 2004 #8 Share Posted June 26, 2004 aint nothing wrong with linkin park they are awesome. ye the song pretty good although i think it would make a good nu-metal/rock track instead of electronica Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazi Posted July 2, 2004 #9 Share Posted July 2, 2004 Yeah, that was cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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