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Ze-style~it's not poetry or short story,it's a mix


Z3vil

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Amazing "Ze Style" tongue.gifgrin2.gifthumbsup.gif

The Will, it sounded just like a will, I can see how some people would think that but, it sounded more of a will too me that is.

Live In Peace, was great, they all are easy to read; I read them so quickly except for your third one.

Nobody, I am that nobody sad.gifdontgetit.gifdisgust.gifcrying.giflaugh.gif . It sounds like me, I am two-faced, but I can't help it, everyone has their negative sides and it's hard not for me to talk to them to my other friends, who agree. I should say this to this person's face, but I know it's best to not tell the person...look you got me confessing, you really are good at this...tongue.gifgrin2.gif

"I Love You...", was nice good job thumbsup.gif

All great. thumbsup.gif

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well if you ppl actually wanna read more, just say so. I got a couple more happy stuff, but the majority tends to lean towards depressive, or is depressive.

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I want some ore...or is it oar tongue.gif

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kool

um ok then let me find one.

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Ok I found one Not Much to Life

There really isn't much to life when you think about it. You're born, you live and then you die. How boring. How plain. Not much to life at all.

Then why do we continue to live if there's nothing more to our life? Why does anything exist on our Earth? All anything does is live and die.

There's a simple answer to that. We are here to ADD something to our life. Humans have the ability to do so. The only problem is, that some don't have the will to do so.

To live and to die is our fate, yes. But what about the rest? What about love and happiness? Prosperity and family? What about those?

But we're forgetting the other side of things. Hate and evil. Death and deprivation. We cannot forget the darker side of life.

Our world is a place of sweets and sours, as I once heard someone say. And that is the added part of life. It isn't just to live and die, as we sometimes are lead to believe.

Life is to live and die, yes. But it is also to love and be loved, to be hurt, and hurtful. To experience the best in life, AND the worst. The whole of human emotion should be used by every living being before we die. Loneliness, and extreme happiness, depression and sensitivity.

We can't just focus on one or two of our rational emotions. We need the irrational mixed in, craziness.

Without that, emotion, the will to do more, then there really is nothing more in life than to live and die.

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"Not Much to Live"Now that one got me thinking...I've always thought about the point in living. Now, you've shown me. You've out done yourself grin2.gifthumbsup.gif

More please thumbsup.gif

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wow... kool....

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random one I picked out of nowhere.

Could You Betray Me?

As a little girl I was safe within your arms, but then the part I loved about you was lost. You said you'd never hurt me, but then one day you raised your hand to me. Father, why did you betray my trust?

I told you my troubles, and you were there for me. You let my cry on your shoulder when the times got too hard to bear. We shared secrets and promised to always be there for eachother. But then you made more friends and became more popular, and my secrets, OUR secrets, were their's. My life history was told to all those who would torture me about it. My dear, best friend, how could you hurt me as you did?

I first met you at a party. We talked. Neither of us were into dancing. Exchanging numbers, we each hoped to talk to eachother again soon. I told my new friends about you, and you told yours. We arranged to meet again, and then again and again. We both promised to stay with eachother till death do us part, in sickness and in health, for richer or poorer. And we both meant it.

If there is anyone in my life,I know you would never betray me. You would rather slit your throat before ever making me cry like others have.

Thank you, my friend, husband, and now family.

((just so you know, this has nothing to do with me, just thought I'd tell you, cause other people have thought that.))

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"Could You Betray Me" Found a wierd problem. Who was this "Ze Poem" (tongue.gif) directed at, the father or the girl's husband, or was her father, her husband... i think i'm gonna be sick...

Can you clear this one up for me?

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ok, the first part is about a little girl and her dad.

middle about the same girl and her best friend.

end, the last 3 are about the girl and her husband.

that clerify it?

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Aaah, good clerification. thumbsup.gif

Maybe I should hold up a sign saying "I'm Stupid", like what Disinterested said. laugh.gif

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no, that's ok. no need for a sign, saying it is just as easy as a sign.

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Alrighty then...but if you need someone to hold up a sign, you know who to go to tongue.gifgrin2.gif

Anyways, got any more of these Ze Poems around

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lol

ok, but this is the last one for awhile.

I'm going on vacation for about a week.

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kinda depressing. What happened

The sky is shrowded in shadow. Or is it just my vision?

The air is gone. Or have my lungs stopped working?

I don't know anymore. Has my mind snapped?

What's the last thing I remember? Blood.

Was it mine... or someone elses?

What happened to me? Why can't I remember?

I have to know....

The sky opens up again. The light pouring through.

A light is shining in my eyes. Who is that?

God? HA! God has abandoned me.

Where was he all the times I was hurt and abused.

Then it all comes back to me. I know.

The blood....it was so thick... it was mine.

I know.... everything now.

It was because of you, that I did this to myself.

It's because of you that I'm here with this doctor leaning over me.

You were the cause of all my pain and suffering.

And I know you knew that, and you reveled in it.

You loved the scared look on my face, the pain in my eyes.

I can see you out of the corner of my eyes.

You have that concerned face that I know is fake

The doctor says I'll be fine in a day or two.

You ask if you can take me home today...

... the doctor says yes.

As I'm being gently set in a wheel chair, I have a wish in my heart.

God, I wish I didn't remember what happened.

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Now that's deep and disturbing. Nice one thumbsup.gif

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well, I'm back from vacation.... yeah.... made this.

I Love You, But...

I quote. "How can I say I love you? Let me count the ways."

A famous quote, but I only have one reason to tell.

I love you, just for being you.

You're smart about so much,

But naive about so much more.

You're fun to be with,

But we never have anything to talk about.

You make me feel good, beautiful even,

But scare me with how forth coming you are.

You know what to say,

But you also say it at the wrong times.

You love to sing to me,

But you aren't good at singing... at all.

You are sweet and kind to me,

But I'm not used to it.

You hold me close and safely in your arms,

But I don't need it at that time.

You love me,

But you need something more.

With all the pain and pleasure,

I ignore the bad,

And focus on the good.

I love you more than life itself,

But I can't tell you.

there, what ya think?

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