cor_raven Posted August 10, 2004 #1 Share Posted August 10, 2004 Upon the Road Upon the road far, long and wide stretches on as one stride Past the fields of wheat and corn past the cattle of long horn Across rivers under sky over hills where eagles fly Through old forests trees of green through bright valleys fair to be seen It follows streams to the sea for this road goes on to see Upon the road far, long and wide stretches on as one stride tell me waht you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted August 10, 2004 #2 Share Posted August 10, 2004 cor_raven that's lovely! I particularly like: Through old forests trees of green through bright valleys fair to be seen Dot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janiel Posted August 10, 2004 #3 Share Posted August 10, 2004 very good encore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seventh_son Posted August 11, 2004 #4 Share Posted August 11, 2004 Good job, it's got a very nice flow to it!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chingko Posted August 12, 2004 #5 Share Posted August 12, 2004 Nice poem.. .It rhymes and flows very well. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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