+joc Posted October 31, 2012 #151 Share Posted October 31, 2012 Im accepting my own challenge, I couldn't resist. I am orange, fat and round sitting on the mucky ground children come here through farm gates one by one carry away my mates a little boy picked me up I went for a ride in his dad's pick up truck he took me home and called me "Jack" to that field of mud I'll never go back he carved two eyes into me so wherever I went I could see grabbed a candle short and thick with a flame he then lit it's wick I gave a clever wink with my eye because to tell the truth you cannot lie it's Halloween and i'd rather be a silly pumpkin face then Gramma's pie! Edit...had to fix something that didn't sound right. Now, the season finally feels right! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted November 1, 2012 #152 Share Posted November 1, 2012 I'd like to offer a challenge. Write a poem from the perspective of a member of the opposite sex. You ET's reading this....just pick one. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted November 1, 2012 #153 Share Posted November 1, 2012 (edited) A new challenge. Maybe a very short story about loss. With a good hunch on how the world worked Elias spun in front of the mirror holding his bag of candy. Empty wrappers parachuted safely onto the carpet while hard candy still unwrapped became projectiles that Grandpa Steele had to dodge. "Now settle down, Halloween used to be more scary than it is n....." "Rawr!!!! Monster attack!," Elias pounced, more candies rained down littering the ground in pastels, dark reds, and his favorite purple ones. Grandson continued, "No, Halloween is the last holiday that cannot be taken from me, it is scary, very scary and I imagine it will always be that way." Looking into the mirror again Elias pulled the bottom corner of his Obama mask to adjust it, "Adults have kidnapped the tooth fairy but pay the ransom themselves? Easter, no bunny. Christmas, no Santa Claus. New Years? I am not allowed to stay up til Midnight and I hear that is when all the magic happens." Grandpa Steele just nodded and grinned but felt a very deep pang, a sense of loss for his own childhood, and Halloween. If only ghosts and goblins were the only things to fear in this world. If only God was always going to help us. Sometimes we will be on our own, Grandpa Steele knew this. The loss was very real, even those childish fears would be taken from his grandson, dispelled, cast against a brick wall and they would shatter, but what would take their place? Real fears, real worries, real life.... If only for a moment the fears of childhood were not lost, if they could just return for one day, grandfather would take his new found share and give them to his grandson so he can enjoy the last holiday a little bit longer. Edited November 1, 2012 by Chasingtherabbit 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted November 2, 2012 Author #154 Share Posted November 2, 2012 New challenge. A humerous halloween themed poem from the point of view of a pumpkin. We don't celebrate Halloween down here, so writing this was fun. Thank's for posting it. That Pumpkin's not very Mean........... They cut me from the vine, Then picked my innards clean, Then carved in me a hideous face, That I was sure was very mean! They plonked a candle in me, That glowed on Halloween. But the kid's they only laughed at me! Ha ha it's Mr Bean! 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted November 2, 2012 #155 Share Posted November 2, 2012 Ah, good old Mr Bean. Very fun poem, Professor T! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+joc Posted November 3, 2012 #156 Share Posted November 3, 2012 I'd like to offer a challenge. Write a poem from the perspective of a member of the opposite sex. You ET's reading this....just pick one. Does My Ass Look Fat? When I ask you if my ass looks fat, I'm serious, not joking It isn't a set-up for you to fall into, my guns are not out, drawn and smoking I really want to know, can't you see that And no, I really don't want you to tell me that I'm fat You don't really listen anyway, I've been trying to talk to you all day I'm bloated and don't feel good and you know it But you don't want to help, it's not your job and you show it Why do you have to be so callous? Is everything that matters to you fallous? You never really hear a single word I say Don't you know you cut me into pieces, each and every day? You're the love of my life...at least you used to be But now I'm just your wife, that's what you chose for me You cut me to the quick with your selfish words of wit You say it's all my fault, that I'm acting immature You make me cry and then you want to make up Like having sex is just some kind of cure. I'm a beautiful person on the inside And I'm a beautiful person on the outside And when I ask you if my ass looks fat I just want to be told exactly that That I'm a beautiful person! 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted November 4, 2012 #157 Share Posted November 4, 2012 I'd like to offer a challenge. Write a poem from the perspective of a member of the opposite sex. You ET's reading this....just pick one. I'm gonna accept my own challenge.... This is written from the perspective of my ex-wife 3 years ago yesterday in fact. I watch him, packing his things just what he needs for now he'll be back for all of it later Gotta be strong gotta stay resolute watching the father of my children try not to cry as he gets his lunch for tomorrow from my cabinet for the last time its his fault he lied again after i forgave him, after I took him back after he tried so hard for 3 YEARS after we painstakingly deconstructed, rebuilt, rebuilt again trying to keep it solid holding on tenously we made it work but not this time this time he smashed it to bits like the coffee mug I threw at his head and missed that first year we were married an argument I don't remember a simpler time I wish for oh to have stupid problems like we used to looking back he disappointed me even then I always had to take charge taking up the slack his weakness caused I look at him and want to puke and **** him all at the same time I wish he'd hurry this is killing me the father of my children, my husband, Nobody I love like him Nobody I hate like him leave the room sit on the couch and cry he tries to comfort me gotta be strong shrug him off tell him to go the door clicks I've never felt so alone. I've never felt so free. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booNyzarC Posted November 4, 2012 #158 Share Posted November 4, 2012 I'm gonna accept my own challenge.... This is written from the perspective of my ex-wife 3 years ago yesterday in fact. I watch him, packing his things just what he needs for now he'll be back for all of it later Gotta be strong gotta stay resolute watching the father of my children try not to cry as he gets his lunch for tomorrow from my cabinet for the last time its his fault he lied again after i forgave him, after I took him back after he tried so hard for 3 YEARS after we painstakingly deconstructed, rebuilt, rebuilt again trying to keep it solid holding on tenously we made it work but not this time this time he smashed it to bits like the coffee mug I threw at his head and missed that first year we were married an argument I don't remember a simpler time I wish for oh to have stupid problems like we used to looking back he disappointed me even then I always had to take charge taking up the slack his weakness caused I look at him and want to puke and **** him all at the same time I wish he'd hurry this is killing me the father of my children, my husband, Nobody I love like him Nobody I hate like him leave the room sit on the couch and cry he tries to comfort me gotta be strong shrug him off tell him to go the door clicks I've never felt so alone. I've never felt so free. That's brutal... and depressing... Well written. But still brutal. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted November 4, 2012 #159 Share Posted November 4, 2012 That's brutal... and depressing... Well written. But still brutal. It was a brutal day. Thanks for the compliment though. Glad I captured the emotion of the time accurately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted November 6, 2012 #160 Share Posted November 6, 2012 sorry for killing the thread with my eyeore-esque poem folks......my bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
booNyzarC Posted November 6, 2012 #161 Share Posted November 6, 2012 Don't be silly! Challenge: A happy poem to make orangepeaceful feel more peaceful. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwakenAscension Posted November 20, 2012 #162 Share Posted November 20, 2012 sorry for killing the thread with my eyeore-esque poem folks......my bad. Don't be silly! Challenge: A happy poem to make orangepeaceful feel more peaceful. Orangepeaceful may be in sorrow for the thread he once killed but then it is resurrected tomorrow as challenges are fulfilled and entertain those who follow the immortal posts that instilled a competitiveness which borrows from the curious that are filled with talent that eternally flows by the very will of the skill. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwakenAscension Posted November 20, 2012 #163 Share Posted November 20, 2012 Challenge: Write about the one person, that disgusts you the most, that you despise and cant stand... write about this person in a very humanizing, understanding way. (No names, ofcourse.) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B Randomly Posted January 2, 2013 #164 Share Posted January 2, 2013 New Challenge!!... A story/poem/etc about a place that brings you peace 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted January 3, 2013 #165 Share Posted January 3, 2013 Don't be silly! Challenge: A happy poem to make orangepeaceful feel more peaceful. You can't make someone feel more like their name. It is theirs, they chose it, and if it ever was them, do they now wear it as a mask? I ask because sometimes I don't even feel like myself, or anyone, as if being me were a skill I have not mastered. So are we nothing more than memories because in the moment I was fake. Memories and emotions, nothing more. I want to practice being human but I am an orange on the surface and an angry orange cannot turn red. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted January 4, 2013 #166 Share Posted January 4, 2013 I'd like to offer a challenge. Write a poem from the perspective of a member of the opposite sex. You ET's reading this....just pick one. I don't know who to be If a boy, I have not been given an example Of how to be a man If a girl, shouldn't I want to be married? They told me I would bond But I don't feel like a mom I'm still worried I showed you my aggressive side I thought to do the opposite I would be super nice But now I'm thinking it would do better To be just normal Even if that has never been me I wrote in my diary How I lost the fight To be human, oh no They said by age 3 I would first realize gender By age 7 it would make complete sense Years later I found a role Being a boy or girl is easy To be human, not so 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted January 5, 2013 #167 Share Posted January 5, 2013 Challenge: Write about the one person, that disgusts you the most, that you despise and cant stand... write about this person in a very humanizing, understanding way. (No names, ofcourse.) No names this will be the easy part to protect myself of course not the innocent or the guilty we are both to degree wake up in the morning put on a personality right after my shoes with boots on can walk through anything but I'm so scared stayed up all night just to not be alone with myself sleep is coming but dreams stopped visiting everything is still here yet home has been robbed or is it that I'm a ghost now unable to connect to anyone not a good friend even if I'd like to be New Challenge!!... A story/poem/etc about a place that brings you peace Slowly strech out one arm then curving it leaning your head until you recognize breath sacred element you roared with wind in my ear my jacket kept me safe but you never meant harm you caught my kite dragon tail in the sky i pulled on the string but it snapped and birds are free so are we the currents guide us sacred 4 directions sacred 4 winds wind a string around 2 sticks wind my heart around your voice just keep talking Sandy 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted January 5, 2013 #168 Share Posted January 5, 2013 Challenge: a short story less than 600 words, one or two paragraphs is encouraged, of how you envision the world to be in 2525. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted January 14, 2013 Author #169 Share Posted January 14, 2013 Challenge: a short story less than 600 words, one or two paragraphs is encouraged, of how you envision the world to be in 2525. Bugger.. Is 621 words.. In the year 2525, the rampant advancement of replicator technologies, Artificial intelligence, Genetic Engineering and Nano Technologies will mean any physical manifestation in the world can no longer be classed as family, genus or as an original mineral or vegetable... In other words, anything physical (including humans) could easily be a creation of technological means. While this is great for humans to get anything or everything they want to live and survive, it will lead to a human's doubting their own reality in a world that gives all that is needed or wanted simply by asking for it. For example.. A young man in his mid teens starts finding that school no longer serves his social or spiritual needs. The teachers (some human, some alien in appearance) no longer keep his mind settled on the chores of learning and experience for he has become distracted by the world at large and the burning question of reality wants to be answered.. Everything around him is separate from his self, and he feels that he is the only original and real thing in the world. He visits the bathroom, and stands before the Mirrors.. There, his reflection shows concern, confusion, for he has settled into feelings that all but he in the world is fake. That all but he in the world is in on some shared secret that only he is unaware of.. He'd settled into despondency.. Yet most day's he suffered a god complex? Most days a glance in the mirror brought feelings of rapture? A friend enters the bathroom and stands beside him at the mirrors where their reflections meet.. She was not human today, and female.. Her skin was a subtle purple, and hair white and somehow flecked with polished silver.. As usual, there was no greeting or Hi. They knew each other's identity by feeling alone, each currently owned faces that were foreign.. "Party on hill road after school" She said, "Ya coming?" "Perhaps" He said, watching as she raked her slender fingers through her hair. "It's an alien Fem Party.." She said, moving behind him, then throwing her arms around his neck and giving him a hug, "That means none of these" she added, reaching down his front to give him a jiggle. She left as quickly as she'd arrived, and he stood there once more, alone, before the mirror feeling within himself like a jigsaw piece in the wrong box. His thoughts briefly returned to question reality.. Was she in on the secret? Was she really a life-long friend or perhaps she was someone's nano creation, a brief pleasure, a toy now wandering about in this fake world. He sighed.. Perhaps a party would cure his separation from reality? He leaned forward, and touched the Mirror with two fingers.. "Oh Mirror Mirror" He said, closing his eyes to a fraction of a slit, "See my mind's eye and make me a female, feline.." And slowly it all unfurled. The self replicating medical nanno's on the mirror invaded his skin, his hair, his body.. With two fingers pressed against the glass and eyes barely open the transformation began and he changed before the mirror.. His Skin sprouting fur, the bones and muscles changed and re-arranged by nanno technology. The buzzing and vibrating of the transformation was always uncomfortable like a mild electric shock. The pins and needles about his body always made him cringe but it was the itching behind clenched eyes that always hurt most. Ten minutes and it was over, her feline eyes opened, and she had become an elegant feline creature. It would be hours before her Genetics would be fully changed, but no longer did she feel separated from the world around her. Once more, her god complex had returned.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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