The Cheat Posted November 18, 2004 #51 Share Posted November 18, 2004 great poems everyone!! here's one from me. 'tis about laying on my floor staring at the cieling and getting totally lost in daydreams (i do this frequently) At the blank ceiling I do stare Unblinking through the dusty air Shadows revolve from ceiling fan Lull me to waking dreams again The yellow ambient shading To vibrant colors is fading From my mind thoughts are projected Scenes play out so well directed Mentally forward and rewind Through pictures clear, though eyes are blind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Cheat Posted November 18, 2004 #52 Share Posted November 18, 2004 and another from me that i just wrote for class the other day. I think its pretty good for having to fit it into sonnet form ‘What is love?,” is the questioned posed By so many who are lost. ‘If I find it, how will I know If it’s really worth the cost?’ ‘Is lust love or only a feign? Is love a walk on a cloud? Is there naught at all to be gained? Must love be proclaimed aloud?’ Don’t say ‘I love you more than air’, For that likely isn’t true. But so much more you’ll love the air, If you breathe for more than you. Love is true that you are giving If for someone else you’re living Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mishari Posted November 19, 2004 #53 Share Posted November 19, 2004 Here is a short one that i wrote for dodo: Flowers will die, And the sun will set. But you’re the one person, That I will never forget. My lips are cold, Because I cannot kiss you. My arms are empty, Because I cannot hold you. I may be lost and confused, And don’t know what to do. But I know one thing, That I love you. Your name is so precious, And will never grow old. It is engraved in my heart, With letters of gold. You’ve won my love, now I love you, This heart of mine, I give to you. So keep it safe, as I have done, For you have two, and I have none....I love you dodo!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFarGone Posted November 19, 2004 Author #54 Share Posted November 19, 2004 Amazing, i love it. I'll probably have more for this evening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted November 19, 2004 #55 Share Posted November 19, 2004 Yaks we jiggle o Yaks! Hairy fuzzy lumpkins! flaring nostrils snort steam misty morning fog we giggle softly O yak! Twice as groovy as a camel dont not need as many humps half a loaf of Moey love crumpet festering neon humperdink berry apple o yak! verily unto Yak! to yak or not to yak! Deny thy yak and refuse thy yak! what yak thru yonder window yaks! o yak ! o yak! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted November 19, 2004 #56 Share Posted November 19, 2004 Jenny Jenny Moe and Jenny Will he sniff her pie? Jenny Jenny Finds a penny Look at her burning eyes! Jenny Jenny slams the door Jenny Jenny Moe on the floor Jenny Jenny Burning fear Kicks Moe in his bony rear. Jenny Jenny Moe's sweet Jenny Screaming at the wind Jenny Jenny Moe is begging She won't let him in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted November 20, 2004 #57 Share Posted November 20, 2004 Indeed brother Snuffs. This was a wholesome ditty. And now for a poem we wrote for Jenny. Moe likes Jenny. She smells like pie. Pie in my eye Jenny Oh Jenny please tell me why intoxicating fumes you smell of sweet pie Jenny Oh Jenny who blows on her trumpet look out your window, see Moey Love Crumpet Jenny Oh Jenny we smile so proudly climbed thru her window then Jenny screamed loudly Jenny Oh Jenny thru the key hole we peak But Jenny did see us she started to shriek jenny Oh jenny she spotted our eye stabbed us thru the key hole we scream " OWWW ! WHYYYY !! " Jenny Oh Jenny we come out from the door we smile at Jenny but she stabs us some more Jenny Oh Jenny she has a stun gun shocks our poor thigh Oh , Jenny is fun Jenny Oh Jenny we thank you with joy we leave you a gift now maybe next time a toy Jenny Oh jenny as bright as a comet we left her some yak meat this made jenny vomit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KT Posted November 21, 2004 #58 Share Posted November 21, 2004 Here I am Here I am as happy as can be. But thats only what i want you to see. Pain in my takes me laces my heart with tears. i cry in my dreams because i can cry with you there. I am full of the life. i Never want to hear these things twice. I lye in a bed colder then my tearful heart. WHY can't you see what this does to me? Why can you hold me and take it all away. i make mistake ones that make me bleed not only from my skin but from my mind.I can't change who i am, i'd never ask you to. Tears flood my eyes Close them tight so they can fall from me. You can't see this pain i hide. hiding is what i do best. sometimes i so deep in my other life i can forget the pain in my real life. But then i wake and see you next to me. but what is the real dream? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KT Posted November 21, 2004 #59 Share Posted November 21, 2004 It wasn't all right i feel covered in bruises of an emotional kind. but you take my breath away in a different whys. my skin craws at the sight of you. blue and purple may be colors i like but not on me. Lies fall on me every time you pray upon my heart, But i will no longer believe in you. A rush of despair and pain rushes from my mind down my spine and chills my body. i didn't know you did, Now we both must live with what you did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted November 21, 2004 #60 Share Posted November 21, 2004 platry poof stick raking willow tree i climb this o lots of hands do twist these nipples 10 - 6 14 - 41 now lights of southern holes time is part of this o Jimmy jukes jam willow bark under ants big ants bit our naked toes how this looks to girls happiness is a cheese log on star wars noodles Why ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted November 21, 2004 #61 Share Posted November 21, 2004 Tickle my pickle You fickle lost nickel. Strawberry ripple On my left nipple. Oh Joy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted November 21, 2004 #62 Share Posted November 21, 2004 mammalgram o mommy pickle daddy pickle healthy handy jobby pickle you want a pickle ? Ill give you a pickle ! bacon soothes the savage beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted November 21, 2004 #63 Share Posted November 21, 2004 Werd to yer muther Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted November 22, 2004 #64 Share Posted November 22, 2004 I sit and comtemplate the many things I've come to hate Indifference is a cruel beast blindness is what I like least. thoughtlessness makes me shiver when I've seen tears run like a river. So boo-hoo! I uncompliment you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moe eubleck Posted November 22, 2004 #65 Share Posted November 22, 2004 o * offers Dot his lunch money * Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted November 22, 2004 #66 Share Posted November 22, 2004 tis ok Moe I already got my lunch money. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFarGone Posted November 23, 2004 Author #67 Share Posted November 23, 2004 Wicked stuff. I dont know about Moes though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KT Posted November 23, 2004 #68 Share Posted November 23, 2004 (edited) Love is love is what i feel for you love is when you fell to me love is when you fixed my broken heart love is what we make of it love is the thing makes us fight for one another love is what i say to you love is what everyone should know love is true to me and you love is what we need to do love is the most powerful force that i've discovered senses i met you Edited November 23, 2004 by KT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFarGone Posted November 23, 2004 Author #69 Share Posted November 23, 2004 Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saRa Posted November 23, 2004 #70 Share Posted November 23, 2004 "end of no beginning" wishing i could leave to go so far away there's no hope, just memories of the past there's too many things in my way this will always last until i remove it all it will always be in front of me everything is bringing me down to fall there's no escape to be free stuck in this city of drowning in pain there's no boat to help me to the top all this angst and pressure coming down like rain so very quickly, just being dropped all this darkness and no sign of light people being closed off and never seen there's very little hope in sight nothing very extreme there's worlds of emptiness and no thoughts of you burning hatred growing the past repeating, following through the future stowing far away from the red-colored sky metal beats listening in no freedom to fly no waiting for the time to win going so slow and not passing won't i pass the gate and be free? there'll be no thrashing? when we're up with the birds will we fall? will you say any words? will you stall? questions to be read no ignorance towards any wondering what will be said wondering if it will be many there is an end and that end is today there is a friend and that friend will stay Copyright Sara Velasquez and Eric Barde Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koolphone Posted November 23, 2004 #71 Share Posted November 23, 2004 (edited) Edit to remove harsh comment. koolphone, lets all be nice to each other please, that was uncalled for. Thank you... Edited November 23, 2004 by Fluffybunny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted November 23, 2004 #72 Share Posted November 23, 2004 (edited) Edit to remove harsh comment. 367868[/snapback] Koolphone I read all 5 of your posts, and guess what? They all suck. So when you have something better to contribute, perhaps someone (if you are lucky) will take you seriously. Until that time I suggest you read the forum rules. Particularly #6. Good work SaRa, don't mind this ignoramous's comments. KT good post as well! Edited November 24, 2004 by Magikman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TooFarGone Posted November 23, 2004 Author #73 Share Posted November 23, 2004 Man, these forums have become filled with ignorence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saRa Posted November 23, 2004 #74 Share Posted November 23, 2004 Now I'm gone they won't miss I'm better now in the bliss Try to come try to find like you will I'm in my mind Come for me come to choose If you don't I won't lose I'll be hurt cut and bruised in the end it'll be you Now I'm here in this park it's all strange it's pulled apart The light turned off now it's dark I try to feel but I have no heart I look around and it's all marked with some language no, graffiti art I look at trees and there's no bark A huge flash A giant spark (to be continued...) Copyright Sara Velasquez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted November 23, 2004 #75 Share Posted November 23, 2004 very nice SaRa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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