Clarakore Posted October 11, 2012 #1 Share Posted October 11, 2012 Falling notes linger in the air after arguing over who cares? I do you don't feelings that won't go away but you dispelled them and me Ants covered a stepping stone ignored their mound for days poison the old-fashion way but now the sand won't go away hoping for a good hard breeze or else I'll have to get the blower I forgot a broom would be easier Fly to me or sail candle flames burn to the saints don't be afraid dreams only light the way rain will heavy your wings wind will rise the waves fly inbetween the two take care 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashotep Posted October 11, 2012 #2 Share Posted October 11, 2012 If someone doesn't seem to care about your feelings or how you feel then they probably don't care about you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted October 12, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted October 12, 2012 Actually the first stanza is about two people in a relationship, the statements apply to both of them since they both think the same about the other, even if they do care for each other they just do not know how to show it. Relationships of all types are a skill and some who suffer from personality disorders have a hard time with all relationships. Nothing that you said but some do think if someone does something like not show they care that maybe they do not deserve to be in a relationship but I assure you even those who do suffer from personality disorders and at times might seem like they do not care (symptom) also are human and need relationships too. Additional notes on this poem for any interested parties: the first stanza is the past, the second is the present, and the last is the future. Or to be more specific the first is the problem, the second is the solution, and the last is the hard work required to get there, you know the place that normal people get to go to with having a healthy relationship. This poem gives me great hope. I wrote it to myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted October 27, 2012 #4 Share Posted October 27, 2012 Excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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