Knight Of Shadows Posted December 7, 2012 #1 Share Posted December 7, 2012 there was a time when our dreams were free and we were where we wanted to be and all what we can be in the land of passion i was buried six feets under inside your heart i was bound to forever wander destined to collect these pieces torn asounder to shape joy from pain and bath them in splendor a land forgotten by days where demons of the past come out to play adorned by the thorns you placed to block my way instead they carved your name deep in my flesh each wound waiting for a shooting star to make a wish there is no end to these landescapes from your heart there's many exits but no escape there is a secret escaped your lips ,inside there's a wound that always drips there is a man inside longing to be free , but there is no where to run nor to flee deliver me from daily despair with the bright smile you used wear and deceive me like a desert mirage as you push me into your golden cage haunt me in my sleep as well as my awake and imprison me in chains i cannot break as i sit down to write captivated by these precious tunes trying to adorn this letter with words instead of perfumes words of english indulge me but fail to finish this sentence for nothing i will ever write would do justice 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousGreek Posted December 7, 2012 #2 Share Posted December 7, 2012 (edited) Love is a mysterious feeling. It sets you free, but at the same time it somehow makes you feel puzzled. Amazing words right there Edited December 7, 2012 by CuriousGreek 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted December 7, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted December 7, 2012 if you told me that line before i'd put it up in the poem thanks for passing by Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CuriousGreek Posted December 7, 2012 #4 Share Posted December 7, 2012 (edited) if you told me that line before i'd put it up in the poem thanks for passing by Didn't know, that you were going to post a poem I like writing poems. When i get the courage needed, i will post some of them here. You're very welcome!! Edited December 7, 2012 by CuriousGreek 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashotep Posted December 7, 2012 #5 Share Posted December 7, 2012 Good poem, lots of feeling, those memories will get you. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted December 7, 2012 #6 Share Posted December 7, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted December 8, 2012 Author #7 Share Posted December 8, 2012 Good poem, lots of feeling, those memories will get you. thanks may they get you as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted December 8, 2012 #8 Share Posted December 8, 2012 You have a wonderful way with words and their play. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Shadows Posted December 10, 2012 #9 Share Posted December 10, 2012 there was a time when our dreams were free and we were where we wanted to be and all what we can be in the land of passion i was buried six feets under inside your heart i was bound to forever wander destined to collect these pieces torn asounder to shape joy from pain and bath them in splendor a land forgotten by days where demons of the past come out to play adorned by the thorns you placed to block my way instead they carved your name deep in my flesh each wound waiting for a shooting star to make a wish there is no end to these landescapes from your heart there's many exits but no escape there is a secret escaped your lips ,inside there's a wound that always drips there is a man inside longing to be free , but there is no where to run nor to flee deliver me from daily despair with the bright smile you used wear and deceive me like a desert mirage as you push me into your golden cage haunt me in my sleep as well as my awake and imprison me in chains i cannot break as i sit down to write captivated by these precious tunes trying to adorn this letter with words instead of perfumes words of english indulge me but fail to finish this sentence for nothing i will ever write would do justice This comes across as very heartfelt to me for some reason, I really like this. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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