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ImaLoner

A Statue's Plea

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ImaLoner

I haven't written poetry in a very long time. I recently wrote some haiku, so I thought I'd give poetry another try....

The pedestal you have built for me

is much too tall

I fear great heights, you see

From that elevation, I will surely fall

I am just me

Nothing less, nothing more

I will never be

Some goddess to adore

Don't place me above you

Heed the words that I have spoken

For you will eventually see too

I am not extraordinary, I am broken

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orangepeaceful79

I haven't written poetry in a very long time. I recently wrote some haiku, so I thought I'd give poetry another try....

The pedestal you have built for me

is much too tall

I fear great heights, you see

From that elevation, I will surely fall

I am just me

Nothing less, nothing more

I will never be

Some goddess to adore

Don't place me above you

Heed the words that I have spoken

For you will eventually see too

I am not extraordinary, I am broken

I like this. well constructed. feels calm. I don't usually enjoy rhyming poetry, but this is nice.

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spartan max2

Don't place me above you

Heed the words that I have spoken

For you will eventually see too

I am not extraordinary, I am broken

I really like this last part for some reason.

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Professor T

I am just me

Nothing less, nothing more

I will never be

Some goddess to adore

Don't place me above you

Heed the words that I have spoken

This part rocks...

Nicely done..

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Cobalt60

thank you, that wasgreat! Apparition, I don't think that could have been said by anyone else. I don't think you've lost your 'voice', simply haven't spoken for a while.

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OverSword

I agree with orangepeaceful, I think it really works because I can sense the honesty of emotion behind it.

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Cobalt60

dang! just like that i forgot the PS i had in mind! sorry...

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Taun

I thought it would have something about getting rid of pigeons...

Good poem though...

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Still Waters

I like this :tu: You should write poetry more often.

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