One Eerie Night

[Knight Of Shadows]

i open my eye on this moonlit serene sky

basking my eve in glamorous dream

drowning into the depths of extreme

my heart was on display sheltered with a lock

i thought that i've buried the key far away

yet it was invaded without even a knock

made my heart vulnerable toy to play

then there it was mercifully handled

coverd in silky veil and peacefully led

my essence was unveiled , the moon was concealed

and then her face was revealed

fills my soul on the edge of tide

uncovers all those secrets buried inside

i wanted to touch her in those distant dreams

but she kept on run and hide

so many hours have gone so many more are left undone

her love tighten it's grip on my air

killing the words i have rhythm with despair

to embrace this dream to the last extend

the dream that begins with a smile and never end

a part of me tried desperately to wake my heart repeatedly

it could not reach for him but touched him through the glass

still he might be listening but it fell paralyzed in a trance

everytime i think that i've reached the exit

am falling deeper in love with no will to repent

echos resound on the ledge of time and through the glass of wine

between the walls of my heart every word fall within rhyme

but i think that i drank too much .. so it's time for me to hush

happy valentine's day everyone

[Still Waters]

Very nice.

[Miss Shadows]

I Love it.

[Arcana]

Cool....I like your style Knight

[Knight Of Shadows]

thanks all

most approicated arcana

[SHaYap]

you rushed the ending a bit, very bad habit ...

I know because I used to do that a lot

keep the unfinished snippets safe, then weave them back when the time is due,

rushing an end is the burying of future possibilities ...

other than that, good 'un