SHaYap Posted March 13, 2013 #1 Share Posted March 13, 2013 (edited) the gentle lover evicts sleep, for dreams, they steal from him her presence, her breath conjures earthy apple blossoms, on the sweetest summer wind, there is a glowing, over the sky, as if the sun fell into a bottle, a petal, stranded on a withered rose, dangling a speckle of hardened red, so deep that they see through each others' eyes so in one their heart beats each only, for one another the gently loved, half asleep, for dream and wakefulness is unveiled, his heart thunders in her ears, churns a shuddering sigh of passion, do not pursue, from where you know not from, the world might end, while you are away do not chase, what you know not where they go, you might have left heaven, behind, the gentleness of tangled fingers, together, gentle and gently, received each other ... ~third_eye @SHaYAP©2013 ~edit : fiddle diddle ... Edited March 13, 2013 by third_eye 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted March 13, 2013 #2 Share Posted March 13, 2013 I love how the sun falls into a bottle, a speckle of hardened red is also nice. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted March 13, 2013 #3 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Well done..... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted March 14, 2013 #4 Share Posted March 14, 2013 Very nice poem Your fiddle diddle edit is funny 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beastly Decimal Posted March 14, 2013 #5 Share Posted March 14, 2013 I love this one. The imagery is very potent. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted March 14, 2013 Author #6 Share Posted March 14, 2013 I love how the sun falls into a bottle, a speckle of hardened red is also nice. the first line and two that got this one moving .... was walking somewhere for dinner Well done..... Thanks be to you too Very nice poem Your fiddle diddle edit is funny aye .... otherwise I would have fiddled till the diddle did fid I love this one. The imagery is very potent. frankly I was a bit worried in the beginning ... but I guess this one is for the ahem ... more mature readers so I guess no worries thanks ye all ~I bow~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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