TheLogic Posted March 13, 2013 #1 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Ok, this is my first ever post on the creative section of this forum and I never normally share anything like this with anyone so it is pretty nerve wracking but I hope you enjoy it and take from it what you will. I've checked out some peoples work on here and I'm nowhere near as good as them but this poem means something to me. It is called: an ode to the one and only. Ode to the one and only Her life brings me happiness, Joy brings her gaze, Her lips with a tender kiss, Leaves me smiling for days. Her hair falls so elegantly, Like a waterfall down her face, When I’m in her arms, I’d rather be in no other place. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted March 13, 2013 #2 Share Posted March 13, 2013 first one ... good job now show us what you had really done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLogic Posted March 13, 2013 Author #3 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Thank you lol What do you mean what I had really done? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted March 13, 2013 #4 Share Posted March 13, 2013 thats your first. granted ..... you gots more ...... pour it out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLogic Posted March 13, 2013 Author #5 Share Posted March 13, 2013 (edited) I used to have a whole book full, but that is my first ever ode. My book got ripped up back when I was in school so all my other work is gone. Never really had the courage to show people anything I do since I don't believe in my ability to write. This one was written about my girlfriend who I have been with for quite a while. She believes in me and is the reason I put this up Edit: Thanks for the nice comment btw lol Edited March 13, 2013 by TheLogic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted March 13, 2013 #6 Share Posted March 13, 2013 I know a write a bit when I see one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLogic Posted March 13, 2013 Author #7 Share Posted March 13, 2013 (edited) I know a write a bit when I see one? lol oh i get you now. My friend explained. Edited March 13, 2013 by TheLogic 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted March 13, 2013 #8 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Very nice..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLogic Posted March 13, 2013 Author #9 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted March 13, 2013 #10 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Awww ! So sweet. :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLogic Posted March 13, 2013 Author #11 Share Posted March 13, 2013 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted March 13, 2013 #12 Share Posted March 13, 2013 It's lovely....she must be very special. You should write more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLogic Posted March 14, 2013 Author #13 Share Posted March 14, 2013 Thank you She is I will try. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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