SpiritWriter Posted April 17, 2013 #1 Share Posted April 17, 2013 One day I imagine she will greet me or that there is truly such a comfort. Without it I couldn't stand to turn to the beginning of the road that lies beyond the blackness. She was my only love. Each moment is like the time I knew her, somewhere but now, every world has toppled my heart and every man's despair is my despair. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+OverSword Posted April 17, 2013 #2 Share Posted April 17, 2013 SW I had a coworker who writes alot of poetry read your rambling blog and he was pretty impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted April 17, 2013 Author #3 Share Posted April 17, 2013 Oh wow tell them i said thankyou pls.. SW I had a coworker who writes alot of poetry read your rambling blog and he was pretty impressed. Him* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarakore Posted April 18, 2013 #4 Share Posted April 18, 2013 Poems written by old souls, the balance of longing/pain and empathy, the many worlds that we exists in, this poem has a lot going on. You know I really like it. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted April 18, 2013 Author #5 Share Posted April 18, 2013 Poems written by old souls, the balance of longing/pain and empathy, the many worlds that we exists in, this poem has a lot going on. You know I really like it. You are perceptive Britney... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted April 18, 2013 #6 Share Posted April 18, 2013 I detect a stream of violet sparkles in the night .... ~ a nice weave ... SpiritWriter < i bow > Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted April 18, 2013 #7 Share Posted April 18, 2013 Time stands still as the world flashes by......... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted April 18, 2013 Author #8 Share Posted April 18, 2013 I detect a stream of violet sparkles in the night .... ~ a nice weave ... SpiritWriter < i bow > Thank you for your bit of imagry... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JC2 Posted April 18, 2013 #9 Share Posted April 18, 2013 You speak my pain, my love, my heart, are you in my mind...? I hate you, I love you, I love you, I hate you, you need to draw my line... They say the longest, loneliest journey a person can take is from the mind to the heart. The journey back is where the beauty is found. thanks for sharing, X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted April 24, 2013 #10 Share Posted April 24, 2013 Nice one. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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