Knight Of Shadows Posted May 8, 2013 #1 Share Posted May 8, 2013 they've been peaceful farmers in the brief past before the shadows of death on their lands has been cast they set out to reclaim their rights to face the Lord to wash the filth from the face of their world thousands of warriors has left their homes on top of the mountain they gathered like storms in known places unknown faces the heartbeat nervously races but they are not the enemy they shout out unity brave warriors united to fulfill their destiny descended from hell the fiends of night in the distant miles the castle was guarded by the Dragon it's getting hard to determine what's right the arrows and spears showered the Dragon like furious falcons to a million piece they tore down the earth and with it the oppression that haunted them from birth they laid a siege on the Serpent's fortress walls the Dragon is breathing fiery anger as he falls in rage through the shadows screams the bear intimidating the warriors who show no fear holding their arms to wreck , cut and forever tear his thick skin of which they shall wear raising up his carcass on display his corruption is no longer welcome to stay he'll never stop the flame the Poet faced the enemies where others lay dead hearing voices screaming loud inside his head the swords swarming to devour him into the depth the heavy steel penetrated by the arrows of death under the cover of night the Serpent could be seen in sight the Poet swinging the sword without a second to rest the vision became so blurry and started to faint he has no power left deep inside but the Serpent had no where left to hide he no longer can stay awake he finally hit the watery surface of the murky lake unto the eerie depths dragging along the head of the snake 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudshill Posted May 8, 2013 #2 Share Posted May 8, 2013 keep it coming......... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted May 9, 2013 #3 Share Posted May 9, 2013 do a reshuffle, Part III then Part I and end with Part II .... I can't help but see that you compromised this part to an early end ... too hurried can't say I like this as an end part ... good effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted May 9, 2013 Author #4 Share Posted May 9, 2013 (edited) do a reshuffle, Part III then Part I and end with Part II .... I can't help but see that you compromised this part to an early end ... too hurried can't say I like this as an end part ... good effort it's not the end there is at least one . or two parts one done and one am working on Edited May 9, 2013 by Knight Of Shadows 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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