DigitalDreamer Posted May 12, 2013 #1 Share Posted May 12, 2013 the feelings i fight when the times are not bright help shape my life like the scars from a knife maybe i can use them to show what i feel,why i acted how i did in the past if i were dying,her name would be the words i uttered last and a lot of nights,i don't feel alright and my throat lumps and and starts to feel tight try as i may try as i might,these feelings will outstay their invite i'm alive after it all so that's what matters,but do i really survive am i even alive 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
s33ker Posted May 12, 2013 #2 Share Posted May 12, 2013 That "touched" me and I'm pleasantly surprised as poetry never does .Beautiful! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashotep Posted May 12, 2013 #3 Share Posted May 12, 2013 Good poem, all things will pass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Still Waters Posted May 14, 2013 #5 Share Posted May 14, 2013 It's a heartfelt poem DD. Life has a habit of throwing things at us we find hard to cope with, try to stay positive and look forwards not back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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