Just Fate( My new Poem Please Come Here)

[AuroraintheDesert]

Tell me what you think I wrote it today

Just Fate

You say it was just fate

That your choice was made

You stare into an empty space

It's just fate.

Your life

Your talents

All chance in infinite way.

No secrets here

No stories to still be told.

Walking down a shoreline

In the mist of a storm

Tranquility is right at your door.

But all this beauty

In front of you is just chance?

All by fate nothing was decided

It just happened in a blink of an eye?

In the northern country

The stars shine bright

Away from the city

You see the light.

You watch in wonder

At the beauty you see

How can this be?

The steps you trend

In the desert

Covered by the wind

In light time gone by

In the deep red of the evening.

Just fate you tell me

Just fate - I question all your words.

A crevasse in mountain

Of this life

Purple and blue

All night long.

Just fate?

With your analytical mind

You question everything

When it is all so clear

Can't you just believe once in your life

It wasn't fate I tell you

It wasn't chance

That you are here today

Next to me

I'll tell you

It wasn't fate

It was not chance

It was hope

And it was joy

Can you stand to believe?

Is it just fate?

Or something more?

[Daughter of the Nine Moons]

AuroraintheDesert great poetry keep posting

[ROGER]

I usually dont read poems, but your words left me feeling good after reading them. Thank you for sharing.

Granpa Roger.

[AuroraintheDesert]

Thank-you! It is always nice to find people liking my poetry. if you wanan read more of my poetry go to freewebs.com/aurorainthedesert tell me what you think;)

[Diebytheflyguy]

Nice work!

Edited October 31, 2004 by Diebytheflyguy

[AuroraintheDesert]

Thank-you:)