AuroraintheDesert Posted October 31, 2004 #1 Share Posted October 31, 2004 Tell me what you think I wrote it today Just Fate You say it was just fate That your choice was made You stare into an empty space It's just fate. Your life Your talents All chance in infinite way. No secrets here No stories to still be told. Walking down a shoreline In the mist of a storm Tranquility is right at your door. But all this beauty In front of you is just chance? All by fate nothing was decided It just happened in a blink of an eye? In the northern country The stars shine bright Away from the city You see the light. You watch in wonder At the beauty you see How can this be? The steps you trend In the desert Covered by the wind In light time gone by In the deep red of the evening. Just fate you tell me Just fate - I question all your words. A crevasse in mountain Of this life Purple and blue All night long. Just fate? With your analytical mind You question everything When it is all so clear Can't you just believe once in your life It wasn't fate I tell you It wasn't chance That you are here today Next to me I'll tell you It wasn't fate It was not chance It was hope And it was joy Can you stand to believe? Is it just fate? Or something more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted October 31, 2004 #2 Share Posted October 31, 2004 AuroraintheDesert great poetry keep posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROGER Posted October 31, 2004 #3 Share Posted October 31, 2004 I usually dont read poems, but your words left me feeling good after reading them. Thank you for sharing. Granpa Roger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AuroraintheDesert Posted October 31, 2004 Author #4 Share Posted October 31, 2004 Thank-you! It is always nice to find people liking my poetry. if you wanan read more of my poetry go to freewebs.com/aurorainthedesert tell me what you think;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diebytheflyguy Posted October 31, 2004 #5 Share Posted October 31, 2004 (edited) Nice work! Edited October 31, 2004 by Diebytheflyguy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AuroraintheDesert Posted October 31, 2004 Author #6 Share Posted October 31, 2004 Thank-you:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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