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mskate

{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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mskate

Growling and biting

influenced by incentives

hunger the scent gives

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=Jak=

hunger the sent gives

sooner the change turns to note

feed the balance count

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Helen of Annoy

feed the balance count

with firstborn sons, stillborn thoughts

common Golgotha

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=Jak=

common Golgotha

to bury old and start a very

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2015

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OverSword

=Jak= long time no see, and as usual you defy the accepted forms of Haiku! :tu: I would not change you for $100.00.

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2015

and now this one is seven

and five syllables

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Helen of Annoy

and five syllables

may bring warmth to frozen land

revive crystal streams

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Electrika

Thirst for knowledge

Hunger for beauty

Lay to rest

Edited by Electrika

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Helen of Annoy

Hi, Electrika, welcome to UM :)

now... *flashes haiku police badge*

In this particular thread we're trying to write haikus with five syllables in the first line, seven in the second and then five again in the last line.

The only person exempt from that is our dear =Jak= who can put any number of syllables because OverSword said he can :D

Also, the first line of your haiku has to be the last line of the haiku you're posting after.

So,

Lay to rest, these words

that can lose their meaning so

easily, with wind

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Blue Star

Easily with wind

from artichokes and the sprouts

New years cleanse detox

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Helen of Annoy

New years cleanse detox

waits for me outside I just

came to say hello

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MysticStrummer

came to say hello

a random word of kindness

spirit uplifted

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Helen of Annoy

spirit uplifted

almost broke a leg climbing

down from holy height

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Blue Star

Down from Holy Height

Throughout streams of ones being

acclimatise up

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rashore

acclimatise up

or stagnate in your own mind

life is yours alone

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Blue Star

Life is yours alone

Focus, Reach for what you want

May as well enjoy

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rashore

May as well enjoy

tasty fattening cooking

homemade is the best

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Blue Star

Homemade is best

when you become a good cook

practise makes perfect

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Helen of Annoy

practise makes perfect

still I have my fingers burnt

when it was worth it

Edited by Helen of Annoy
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=Jak=

when it was worth it

none see that and when useless

everyone start hit it

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Helen of Annoy

everyone start hit ...

syllable monster ate "it"

content went to sleep

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Overdueleaf

content, went to sleep

woke to a thousand screaming

echos from the past

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Helen of Annoy

echos from the past

may be louder than sorries

uttered against wall

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=Jak=

uttered against wall

five times for eleven days

from eleventh day

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Helen of Annoy

from eleventh day

came the twelfth night with dream brought

by thirteen black sheep

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imrunningthismonkeyfarm

By thirteen black sheep

That's fifty two legs of lamb

Matching hat and shoes?

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