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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition


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Growling and biting

influenced by incentives

hunger the scent gives

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hunger the sent gives

sooner the change turns to note

feed the balance count

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feed the balance count

with firstborn sons, stillborn thoughts

common Golgotha

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common Golgotha

to bury old and start a very

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2015

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=Jak= long time no see, and as usual you defy the accepted forms of Haiku! :tu: I would not change you for $100.00.

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2015

and now this one is seven

and five syllables

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and five syllables

may bring warmth to frozen land

revive crystal streams

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Hi, Electrika, welcome to UM :)

now... *flashes haiku police badge*

In this particular thread we're trying to write haikus with five syllables in the first line, seven in the second and then five again in the last line.

The only person exempt from that is our dear =Jak= who can put any number of syllables because OverSword said he can :D

Also, the first line of your haiku has to be the last line of the haiku you're posting after.

So,

Lay to rest, these words

that can lose their meaning so

easily, with wind

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New years cleanse detox

waits for me outside I just

came to say hello

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came to say hello

a random word of kindness

spirit uplifted

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spirit uplifted

almost broke a leg climbing

down from holy height

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practise makes perfect

still I have my fingers burnt

when it was worth it

Edited by Helen of Annoy
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when it was worth it

none see that and when useless

everyone start hit it

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everyone start hit ...

syllable monster ate "it"

content went to sleep

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echos from the past

may be louder than sorries

uttered against wall

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uttered against wall

five times for eleven days

from eleventh day

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from eleventh day

came the twelfth night with dream brought

by thirteen black sheep

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By thirteen black sheep

That's fifty two legs of lamb

Matching hat and shoes?

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