Wistman Posted April 20, 2019 #5826 Share Posted April 20, 2019 emanating field Earth's mighty glamor, spinning love among the stars 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 20, 2019 #5827 Share Posted April 20, 2019 love among the stars gravity of an embrace dusk and dawn entwined 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 20, 2019 #5828 Share Posted April 20, 2019 dusk and dawn entwined while cramming for exams, strong coffee is crucial 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 20, 2019 #5829 Share Posted April 20, 2019 coffee is crucial for coaxing my brain into material world 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overdueleaf Posted April 20, 2019 #5830 Share Posted April 20, 2019 material world not all its cracked up to be allow soul to breathe 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Pettytalk Posted April 20, 2019 #5831 Share Posted April 20, 2019 allow soul to breathe the wisdom of that upper earth so thin so pure so rare so wise 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 21, 2019 #5832 Share Posted April 21, 2019 8 hours ago, Pettytalk said: allow soul to breathe the wisdom of that upper earth so thin so pure so rare so wise Hello, Pettytalk. Welcome to the thread. That's one beautiful and profound haiku you wrote. There's just this little detail: we're trying to write them with 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second and 5 again in the last line. Not that it turns out that way every time, but it should be close to that. That's why I'll take liberty to start from your last 5 syllables. pure, so rare so wise at our mortal confusion eternity smiles 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overdueleaf Posted April 21, 2019 #5833 Share Posted April 21, 2019 Eternity smiles On life's simple pleasures, all The small things matter 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 21, 2019 #5834 Share Posted April 21, 2019 The small things matter Wisteria flowerfalls bumblebees collide 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+ouija ouija Posted April 21, 2019 #5835 Share Posted April 21, 2019 bumblebees collide apologise and move on wish we could do same 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 21, 2019 #5836 Share Posted April 21, 2019 wish we could do the same like swallows, rejoice the air... err... they eat bugs there 1 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 21, 2019 #5837 Share Posted April 21, 2019 err...they eat bugs there deft within their puzzle notch can't be all that bad 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 21, 2019 #5838 Share Posted April 21, 2019 can't be all that bad light in tunnel may be train so there is an end 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Pettytalk Posted April 21, 2019 #5839 Share Posted April 21, 2019 So there is an end to all that comes with a beginning and also there's a middle 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 21, 2019 #5840 Share Posted April 21, 2019 (edited) and there's a middle (revised ) path among dualities -- sharp, the razor's edge . Edited April 21, 2019 by The Wistman 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 21, 2019 #5841 Share Posted April 21, 2019 sharp, the razor's edge snails don't care, they slide on slime clean hands grip tighter 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 21, 2019 #5842 Share Posted April 21, 2019 clean hands grip tighter though grasping's not ever clean songbirds in birdbath 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 21, 2019 #5843 Share Posted April 21, 2019 songbirds in birdbath do they quarrel or they laugh silver droplets fly 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overdueleaf Posted April 21, 2019 #5844 Share Posted April 21, 2019 (edited) silver droplets fly sky's aresenal is let loose ground soaked in earth's blood Edited April 21, 2019 by Overdueleaf 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 22, 2019 #5845 Share Posted April 22, 2019 ground soaked in earth's blood resurrection may begin hatching cosmic egg 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 22, 2019 #5846 Share Posted April 22, 2019 hatching cosmic egg in nest of wild alchemy raises foam of sea 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 23, 2019 #5847 Share Posted April 23, 2019 raises foam of sea for the birth of beauty, one form of divine love 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 23, 2019 #5848 Share Posted April 23, 2019 form of divine love vibrant fields of glowing lights that swell the stage 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted April 23, 2019 #5849 Share Posted April 23, 2019 lights that swell the stage revealing hidden spectrum in raven's plumage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wistman Posted April 23, 2019 #5850 Share Posted April 23, 2019 in raven's plumage backlit by blue sky something secret is displayed 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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