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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition


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come golden changes 

born of all the little flames  

shielded by kind hands   

 

Edited by Helen of Annoy
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lifting up the lost 

makes one strong enough to punch 

devil in the face 

 

forgive me my feisty moments :D  

 

lifting up the lost 

tides of time are never late 

fate always fulfilled 

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ancient yew counts dawns 

packs of children, hiding in  

shadowy embrace  

 

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cuts through black cocoon 

the same light that is so soft

when dressing the wounds  

 

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On 11/20/2020 at 2:41 PM, The Wistman said:

;)  Sorry, Ozymandias, about that last line.  I do mostly try to finish with a good line to follow, but alas.

Wistman, your haikus are always striking and entertaining. We all have our bad days once in a while. I'm glad you accepted my criticism with a gracious spirit. I'll try to do the same when my turn comes. Keep on haikuing. :)

knits the mending ties

hands recreating daily 

kindred bonds of love

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kindred bonds of love

speaking silently all tongues 

quenching lonely thirst 

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then resumes his drink 

unimpressed with sky and own 

reflection in pond   

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wisdom in transit 

travels light, leaves baggage to 

disperse in sunlight 

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disperse in sunlight

natures way to health, wellness

cleansing, healing, fresh

Edited by Blue Star
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steeping the mincemeat 

confuses South-East Europe

we never do that

 

(No, really... never, ever and call it a cultural difference, but I'm not steeping any mincemeat. Ever :D ) 

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shopping list in hand 

or I'll buy it all except

that what I came for  

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start again from here 

where the late gladioli

spite the morning frost  

 

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