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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Helen of Annoy

without some shadow

we would perish in the sun 

the dose makes poison 

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purrrpetrator
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without some shadow

you're an angel or living

in a sunless world

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sorry missed the page, leaving it in, ignore it
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Helen of Annoy

in a sunless world 

only sadness will take root

bearing bitter fruit  

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bearing bitter fruit

stumbling about in the dark

to what end, pray tell 

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Helen of Annoy

to what end, pray tell

a turd was coated with gold 

should I laugh or cry 

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should i laugh or cry 

or scrape it off and eat it

the gold, not the turd

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Helen of Annoy

the gold, not the turd

doesn't attract flies, doesn't stink and  

won't melt in the rain

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won't melt in the rain 

but in case i don't show up 

do check my Wellies

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Helen of Annoy

do check my Wellies

sometimes they just wander off

who knows where they've been 

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who knows where they've been 

could've been oyster shucking

and then that barn dance

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Helen of Annoy

and then that barn dance

like it was yesterday, see

nothing's changed since then 

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nothing's changed since then

so nothing is now something

emptiness now filled

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Helen of Annoy

emptiness now filled

with experience sparking 

hope in growing soul  

 

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hope in growing soul

food like tomatoes eggplant 

mmm with cheese on top

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Helen of Annoy

mmm with cheese on top

good idea, pizza with 

everything I find 

 

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The Wistman

everything I find

penetrating even those

crooners in the park

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Helen of Annoy

crooners in the park

sudden change in repertoire  

god of thunder sings 

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The Wistman

god of thunder sings

fir trees, whispering, concur:

lightning's got some soul

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Helen of Annoy

lightning's got some soul

in its traces iris grows*

pure, scent of heaven 

 

 

 

*according to old Slavic belief  

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Carlos Allende

Pure scent of Heaven

The exciting new fragrance

In the Pope's Gift Shop

 

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The Wistman

in the Pope's gift shop

master cards accepted, serfs

pray your bottoms off

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Helen of Annoy

pray your bottoms off

or treat others as yourself 

natural choices  

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The Wistman
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natural choices

and moderation may heal

all those reckless wounds

 

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all those reckless wounds

when in reality one

should have done the trick

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Helen of Annoy

should have done the trick 

as seen in the films, with end

we can not hope for 

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