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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Unfortunately
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And your dawning field,

like a diamond on sable,

glittering at night.

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Helen of Annoy

glittering at night. 

leaves and drops, eyes and dreams, in 

silver of full moon 

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silver of full moon

revealing lake's suggestion

tickling loons and me

 

 

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tickling loons and me 

another pair of eyes see

more than mind can take 

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more than mind can take

thunder in the goblet, white

lightning in scarlet

 

 

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Lightning in scarlet,

as Thunder begins to rage;

Still the dragon advances

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dragon advances

through the woods where bear left few

simple facts of life  

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simple facts of life

rolling out like clouds of rain

then all will be clear

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then all will be clear 

like water gushing out of 

stone covered with moss 

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stone covered with moss

remote from concrete sidewalks

tickled by red ants

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tickled by red ants

cracking forward to become  

pebbles, so playful 

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pebbles, so playful

remind us of our child self

soft hands caressing

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soft hands caressing 

shards of crystal ball maybe 

that's how fate hatches  

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that's how fate hatches

from the spaces in-between

fingers and lightning

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fingers and lightning 

both can start a fire, the wise

can put it out too 

 

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can put it out too

gingerly for drowsy eyes

to glean, or follow

 

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to glean, or follow 

threads tangled in tomorrow

sprouting from the stump 

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tcgram

Sprouting from the stump

For life springs eternally

Beauty from ashes

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beauty from ashes

phoenix of the eiderdown

soaring through the smoke

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Soaring through the smoke

High above the atmosphere

Bringing soft rain down

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bringing soft rain down

clouds give of themselves freely

shrinking their being

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shrinking their being

to become the wondrous life

multiplying cells   

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multiplying cells

congregations of fruitful

organic halos

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organic halos

floating beyond space and time

turning with great wheel 

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turning with great wheel

triangulations of stars

crescent moon rising

 

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