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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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The Wistman

splintering darkness

moonbeams slip through branches - cat

dances in spot lights

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Helen of Annoy

dances in spot lights

elegant embodiment

in endless moment 

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The Wistman

in endless movement

passions loop their furnace, just

like those restless thoughts

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Helen of Annoy

like those restless thoughts

growing as lush forest in 

room outside the time  

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The Wistman

room outside the time

of night I danced for you, where

dark willows still sway

 

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Blue Star

dark willows still sway

to the babbling brooks rhythm

Melodies whisper

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The Wistman

melodies whisper

reasons for your gratefulness

on this winding day

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Blue Star

on this winding day

whirls, swirl, spirals coil, cavort

spinning tops ribbon

 

 

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The Wistman

spinning tops ribbon

wild across the galaxies

and conversations

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Blue Star

and conversations

of red queens an' sealing wax

cabbages and kings

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The Wistman

cabbages and kings

how their worth is relative

when stomach's grumbling

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Helen of Annoy

very true! 

 

 

when stomach's grumbling 

feet go, not asking the brain

into bakery 

 

 

 

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Blue Star

into bakery

early morning love and care

result in sweet treats

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The Wistman

result in sweet treats

do combs of honey bees

bear cubs' party time

 

 

 

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Blue Star

bear cubs' party time

Tigger, Eeyore, piglet and Roo

all bring along sticks

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Overdueleaf

all bring along sticks

gathered from underneath grove

of Sycamore trees

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The Wistman

of Sycamore trees

Egyptians carved their portraits

here, I rake the leaves

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Helen of Annoy

here, I rake the leaves

touched with frost they care no more 

soon they'll be compost   

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The Wistman

soon they'll be compost

palace of the miniscule

fire of the phoenix

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Helen of Annoy

fire of the phoenix

raging in the eyes of those 

born of murdered blood 

 

Oh, my, that was dark... sorry about that, I just... falls out of my brain. Here's another possibility: 

 

 

fire of the phoenix 

reshaping the matter for 

new game of old souls 

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The Wistman

new game of old souls

yew trees as mediators

having lived an age

 

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Blue Star

having lived an age

realising, expansion

through love and through fun

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The Wistman

through love and through fun

are precious seconds vested

troubadours have sung

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Blue Star

troubadours have song

tales of love, many times over

in, as many ways

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The Wistman

in as many ways

as clouds glow in the moonlight

does hope fuel the mind

 

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