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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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The Wistman

journey continues

through the mists that obscure, now

I've seen you waving

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Blue Star

journey continues

flowing growth, joy, expansion

new delights unfold

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Helen of Annoy

I've seen you waving

called to new delights unfold 

at the edge of dream 

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Blue Star

Sorry....i'm still not well....slow..

I've seen you waving

a bright smile too, open greeting 

new delights unfold

 

NO, sorry,

 

at the edge of a dream 

where it comes into being

the real magic's there

 

 

 

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Helen of Annoy

:D 

the real magic's there 

where the souls smile in the eyes

tickled by the light   

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The Wistman

tickled by the light

touch of whiskers, the meow

insists I wake up

 

eta:  BlueStar...I didn't know you were/are unwell...big hugs, feel better

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Helen of Annoy

insists I wake up 

in the real dream meant to be

unsealed but slowly

  

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The Wistman

unsealed, but slowly

was my jar of dreams, the moon

caught them in her folds

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Helen of Annoy

caught them in her folds

adding silver to their gold 

born of godly bees 

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The Wistman

born of godly bees

the golden child, honey clad,

claims an ancient crown

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Helen of Annoy

claims an ancient crown 

bearer of the dawn, finding 

ways through darkest night  

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The Wistman

ways through darkest night

arise at need when all seems lost

lightning, then the breach

 

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Helen of Annoy

lightning, then the breach

we'll dance later in the rain

heaven sent some hail 

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The Wistman

heaven sent some hail

to beat the pride out of cars

and toxic mojo

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Helen of Annoy

and toxic mojo 

can be composted under

few shovels of earth   

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The Wistman

few shovels of earth

or black-winged turkey vultures

the scythe swings surely

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Blue Star

the scythe swings surely

reaping time for all seeded

by act, thought and deed

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The Wistman

by act, thought and deed

our pages fill, they flutter

by like bats at dusk

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Blue Star

by like bats at dusk

how thoughts quiver, dart and fly,

deeply nocturnal 

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The Wistman

deeply nocturnal

windy skunks, delicate faced,

lace the dark hemlocks

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Blue Star

lace the dark hemlocks

Socrates drank from his cup

philosophical

 

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Helen of Annoy

philosophical 

with shovel in hand and warm 

coffee in thermos 

 

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OverSword

coffee in thermos

keeps me warm skating on ice

release the Kraken 

:P

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Helen of Annoy

release the Kraken 

breaking ice - and mast and bones  

ruling northern seas    

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The Wistman

ruling northern seas

worthless exchange for lost trees

or dead honey bees

 

 

 

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