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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Helen of Annoy

or dead honey bees

don't reincarnate? join swarm 

in top of life tree  

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in top of life tree

Golden crowned Kinglet sings heart-

felt chants, bright pulses

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Blue Star

felt chants, bright pulses

what's the frequency Jackie?

want to tune in dial

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The Wistman

want to tune in dial

perfume, want to wake up call

the rising red moon

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Blue Star

the rising red Moon

smoke fairies, notes ring through which

pitch comprehended? 

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The Wistman

pitch comprehended?

aye say the bats, poised to swoop

into the deep night

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Helen of Annoy

into the deep night

tattered banners sink, no hope

invokes better luck

 

 

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The Wistman

invokes better luck

to bathe in moonbeams when thoughts

are bleeding and scarred

 

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Helen of Annoy

are bleeding and scarred 

Christ among them - where? - barred from

hypocrite heaven

  

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Blue Star

hypocrite heaven

contradiction in terms, no?

heaven lived here now

 

 

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heaven lived here now

where the humble breathe a sigh

at the tilting clouds

 

 

 

 

 

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Blue Star

at the tilting clouds

puffs of vapour will pass by

breathe well to clear thoughts

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Helen of Annoy

breathe well to clear thoughts 

outside, it's not cold at all 

stars hidden by clouds 

 

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Blue Star

stars hidden by clouds

but knowing they are still there

means that, they still shine

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means that, they still shine

on the mountain pinnacels

west of where we are

 

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Helen of Annoy

west of where we are

obese rats tangled their tails  

cat's eye twitch, dilate    

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* can't believe I misspelled pinnacles.  yipes.

 

cat's eyes twitch, dilate

goldfinches squeak, yellow zoom

still holding my breath

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Helen of Annoy

*I wouldn't even notice if you didn't point it out :D  

 

still holding my breath 

for miracle that took place 

in far too plain sight 

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The Wistman

in far too plain sight

civilization eats its

mind - the dusk comes blue

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Helen of Annoy

mind - the dusk comes blue 

silent glory of brightness 

facing time to fade   

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facing time to fade

old coat and a walking stick

embers in the grate

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embers in the grate

visions conjured amidst coals

prophetic sight

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Helen of Annoy

prophetic sight 

no man's land at midnight, ash 

iron cuts the air  

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iron cuts the air

and fells the tree,  the hidden

brown bear emerges

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brown bear emerges 

and the most convincing death

award goes to the...   

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