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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Blue Star

"I absolutely love English. The only trouble is that the more I learn, the more aware I am just how little I know. It feels much better when you're a total beginner and so proud of each mangled sentence you somehow manage to produce :D 

Thank you both :wub:."   "MRS H of A, Quote."

I feel the same and I'm a native :lol:

 

bitten ruby red

as I hold back this, my tongue

so much to be said

 

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Helen of Annoy

so much to be said 

the painting would remain still

let it live in dreams  

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Blue Star

let it live in dreams

where i talk with ease and flow

together we converse

 

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tcgram

Together we converse

About life in general

Friendship never dies

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OverSword

friendship never dies

traveling through multiverse

we will meet again

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Helen of Annoy

we will meet again 

in the morning, wiser than 

twilight... of the gods 

 

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Ozymandias

twilight... of the gods 

now dimmed by enlightenment

into nothingness

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Helen of Annoy

into nothingness 

leaving just pieces of their   

transparent snakeskin  

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OverSword

transparent snakeskin

covers not opaque intent

eyes remain watchful 

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Helen of Annoy

eyes remain watchful 

accustomed to dark and fog

far peripheral 

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Blue Star

far peripheral

where electrical vision

reveals layered truths

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Helen of Annoy

reveals layered truths 

circling around each other 

centre, can it hold 

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The Wistman

centre, can it hold

as the falcon swings away

falconer unsure

 

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Helen of Annoy

falconer unsure 

what made heroes die for free 

whose problem is this  

 

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The Wistman

whose problem is this

asks the grave digger, his face

weary and forlorn

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Helen of Annoy

weary and forlorn 

discovering the wheel, its 

crushing tendency  

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The Wistman

its crushing tendency

shivers in the siege of Time

and the Mother's glance

 

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Helen of Annoy

and the Mother's glance 

through the veil growing thinner 

with each spin of wheel 

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Ozymandias

with each spin of wheel  

time waits while Lady Luck reigns

Queen of our fortune 

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Helen of Annoy

Queen of our fortune 

bringing strength, the greatest gift 

patiently unwrapped  

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The Wistman

patiently unwrapped

are prizes sent from afar

box is for the cat

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Blue Star

box is for the cat

artists, kids, then recycle

imagination

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The Wistman

imagination

strikes like lightning, sparks the tree

planted in your mind

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Helen of Annoy

planted in your mind 

needs some fertilizer too 

in moderation 

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The Wistman

in moderation

we pace the moonlit path, owls

ask us who we are

 

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