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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Helen of Annoy

ask us who we are

outstretched arm and leg say: friends

in raven language 

 

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The Wistman

in raven language

pretenses are nulllified

sharp, the croaking beak

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Helen of Annoy

sharp, the croaking beak 

near the ear of god of old 

and his set of runes 

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Ozymandias

and his set of runes

tell of loves and lives now lost 

in the mists of time

 

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Helen of Annoy

in the mists of time 

blood finds ways just like water 

wearing the stone down 

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Ozymandias

wearing the stone down

generations step this way

threading times needle

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Helen of Annoy

threading times needle 

task that asks for gentle hand

and hardened steel will   

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The Wistman

and hardened steel will

not defeat the cogent mind

lightning in the clouds

 

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Helen of Annoy

lightning in the clouds

twice, just to be sure it was

no coincidence 

 

 

 

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The Wistman

no coincidence

the lightning bug suggests hope

in the darkened glade

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Helen of Annoy

in the darkened glade 

glimmers life in eyes and stars

visiting the earth 

  

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The Wistman

visiting the earth

is so wearying, the moon

sends its magnet loom

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Blue Star

sends its magnet loom

weave dreams to magic carpets

dare to step on board

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The Wistman

dare to step on board

the hover craft you dream of

windsong in your ears

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Helen of Annoy

windsong in your ears

a small life in history 

merry leap of soul 

 

 

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The Wistman

merry leap of soul

twinkling like Tinker Bell you

flash above it all

 

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Helen of Annoy

flash above it all 

giant meteor of love 

explode with laughter 

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The Wistman

explode with laughter

shell of ego vaporized

perfuming the air

 

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Helen of Annoy

perfuming the air 

humble beauty, violets

in winter sun brave    

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The Wistman

in winter sun brave

chimney smoke rises, flag of

defiance, glowing

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Blue Star

defiance, glowing

warm hearth, warm home, don't they say

reading hot coal runes

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Helen of Annoy

reading hot coal runes

in cold blood sometimes when loud  

bleating wakes wolf up 

 

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The Wistman

bleating wakes wolf up

as the sun is setting, shepherd

carries lamb in arms

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Blue Star

carries lamb in arms

zoomorphic shifting, left, right

surreal, juxtaposed

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The Wistman

surreal, juxtaposed

with the moon is the meadow

fluttering with moths

 

 

 

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