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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Helen of Annoy

highlighting details 

for easier reading, signs 

growing in number 

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Blue Star

growing in number

how can it still be denied

when's the tipping point

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The Wistman

when's the tipping point

roars the mother polar bear

on her shard of ice

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Blue Star

on her shard of ice

no-one responsible does

a thing to stop it

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Helen of Annoy

a thing to stop it

so simple but so hard for 

damn simulacrums 

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The Wistman

damn simulacrums

watch the pigeons poop on them

improving the view

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Helen of Annoy

improving the view 

in grass still winter sleepy

cat soaks sunshine in   

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The Wistman

cat soaks sunshine in

tip of tail twitching in time

whiskers lit hot white

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Helen of Annoy

whiskers lit hot white

a vibration caught then shared  

with good friends of mine 

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The Wistman

with good friends of mine

conversation curls like hands

holding, intertwined

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Helen of Annoy

holding, intertwined 

threads so fine they float through  

seemingly still air   

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The Wistman

seemingly still air

sunlit endless blue screen, there

an eagle, circling

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Helen of Annoy

an eagle, circling 

above rats' panic patterns

fat fish is the prey   

  

 

 

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The Wistman

fat fish is the prey

swimming too near the surface, sharp

the grasp from above

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Helen of Annoy

the grasp from above

like rapture but with rupture 

scales fall, mucky snow    

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Tuco's Gas
3 minutes ago, Helen of Annoy said:

the grasp from above

like rapture but with rupture 

scales fall, mucky snow    

Icthyologist

Bends down and drinks the slush

thinks it tastes like trout

 

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Helen of Annoy

Welcome to the thread :D 

(Psst... In this thread your first line should be the last line of the previous haiku.) 

 

thinks it tastes like trout 

which is not to be discussed 

eyes roll silently

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The Wistman

eyes roll silently

champagne glasses shimmer, smiles

mask what they infer

 

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Helen of Annoy

mask what they infer 

snorting stench of mass graves like 

demon possessed swine  

 

 

aaaand there she is again... I'll send her to have her afternoon nap... 

 

 

 

mask what they infer 

wearing thick coat of despair 

leeches at their fair   

  

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The Wistman

leeches at their fair

-fooled lunch engorged, hoping their

comeuppance won't come

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Helen of Annoy

comeuppance won't come 

to wrong address or alone

it loves company  

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The Wistman

it loves company

and flies in on vulture's wings

returning to source

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Helen of Annoy

returning to source

breaking down molecules and 

clumps of murky thoughts   

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The Wistman

clumps of murky thoughts

dissipate on reflection

face and sky in pond

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Helen of Annoy

face and sky in pond

merged by ripples, such message 

brought by simple frog 

 

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