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{un}holy haiku - 3rd Edition

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Helen of Annoy

contrast shows the way 

to the autumn quiet in

sun surprised cold rain   

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joc

sun surprised cold rain 

like warm tears on my pillow

create the contrast

 

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Helen of Annoy

create the contrast 

by just asking questions while 

you were told on time

 

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Blue Star

you were told on time

maybe just didn't want me

only you can say

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Helen of Annoy

only you can say 

what is the colour of your 

inner sky at night 

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joc

inner sky at night

star lit and spectacular

the perspective reigns

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Helen of Annoy

the perspective reigns

mind of frog flying so high

caught by orange beak  

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Ozymandias

caught by orange beak

blackbird probed the earth to seek

worms that twist and turn

 

 

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Helen of Annoy

worms that twist and turn 

dog digging to hide his bone  

in their compost heap 

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Blue Star

in their compost heap

a heated microcosm 

richly thrive at work 

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Helen of Annoy

richly thrive at work

swarm of warm and healing thoughts 

unbound right on time 

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OverSword

unbound right on time 

dry leaves circle to the ground

harvest moon hangs low

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Helen of Annoy

harvest moon hangs low 

over the fields that still hide

more than meets the eye

 

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Blue Star

more than meets the eye

running deeper waters hide

judging book by coat

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OverSword

judging book by coat

brings a warmth to very cold words

if the picture's nice

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Blue Star

if the picture's nice

worth a longer look, take note

it is what it is

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OverSword

it is what it is

that's what they always say when

something is ****ed up

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Blue Star

something is ****ed up

add it to the bill, they'll pay

or we'll keep the car

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Helen of Annoy

or we'll keep the car 

held together by dirt, tape 

and necessity 

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OverSword
6 minutes ago, Helen of Annoy said:

or we'll keep the car 

held together by dirt, tape 

and necessity 

I've owned a few of those :yes:

 

and necessity

is why I set my alarm

and work hungover

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Helen of Annoy

and work hungover 

so you can afford more of 

such lovely moments 

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Ozymandias

such lovely moments 

often take us by surprise

relived in mind's eyes

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Helen of Annoy

relived in mind's eyes 

a rose had no thorns or they 

cut like cold steel knives   

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Blue Star

cut like cold steel knives

some painful memories can

but need not, your call

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Helen of Annoy

but need not, your call 

last year's snow or tomorrow 

floating like hope should 

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