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training wheels haiku


Helen of Annoy

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So,  every alternate poster must strictly follow 5 7 5 by helping previous free writer.  Just putting their free writing in systematic haiku syllables. 

 

You shape the free haiku into 5 7 5 form and leave new free haiku for the next poster to put into 5 7 5 and leave his new free haiku and so on. 

 

Here's one for you to shape: (don't forget to leave one free haiku for the next poster)

 

listening to the ages

hearing just my own blood

my god, what is wrong with me

 

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What is wrong with you

free writers don't know haiku

come just post your thought

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Our blood our child our caste

High and low, listening from ages

God and lower god, Creation of mind

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:lol:

I don't think this is working as intended :lol:

It doesn't matter, haiku on! 

 

Creation of mind 

solidified in body 

made of stardust and tears

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wheels fell off trainer

race had only just started

upside down in ditch :lol:

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Then sure it's

going to climb 

the other side of lake

Do you know swimming

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