Magical L Posted February 9, 2005 #1 Share Posted February 9, 2005 Rose The snow is falling, over the treetops the wind is calling A white blanket covering the ground, spreading magic all around Can you hear like angels soothing your fear Can you see the person who is reaching out to me Can you feel that everything you touch is real Under the snow, there's something that may not show Soft under your fingers, a scent that still lingers Something that will forever be growing Like a friendship always flowing Sometimes it will hurt you, no matter what you do Through pain Everlasting rain Comes something more sweet, that no one can ever defeat The beauty of the rose, is what brings us close Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryso Posted February 9, 2005 #2 Share Posted February 9, 2005 Impressive... I don't normaly leave remarks about poems, but yours I have because it stirs something in me. It's easy to read and easy to understand. You have a great gift with words! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bone_Collector Posted February 10, 2005 #3 Share Posted February 10, 2005 It's really good! The flow of words is beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rachelkleypassparrow Posted February 10, 2005 #4 Share Posted February 10, 2005 Roses are my favourite flower and that poem makes the rose even more beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical L Posted February 14, 2005 Author #5 Share Posted February 14, 2005 Awww thank you guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elfstone810 Posted February 14, 2005 #6 Share Posted February 14, 2005 That is very nice. I see you're from Sweden? Is English your native tongue or are you writing this in a second language? (I'm always green with envy over people who can write in more than one language. I know snatches of half a dozen, but asking for directions to the loo is about my limit in any of them. ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical L Posted February 17, 2005 Author #7 Share Posted February 17, 2005 Heh, english is my second language. Swedish is my native. I studied english from first grade though and i love writing...so yah... thanx though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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