Accident Posted August 11, 2005 #1 Share Posted August 11, 2005 well my bro told me this story: there were 3 kids, 2 boys and a girl, they would play in the basement then one day in a game of tag, one of them pushed a boy and dropped and old bookshelf,then a mask fell from behind the books and they got it, the put it on and one kid ( the one who put it on ) was liike " i see something or some people it looks like this basement! " it was of 3 kids playing a puzzle ( like chute and ladders ) dressed in old time clothes, and then someone came running the stairs screaming " ITS GONNA BLOW" and that was all. so the 3 kids took a look and thought "hhmmm... maybe its about the past, maybe if we do the same we can understand them and warn them so they can live." and the girl replied " yeah?, were we gonna get the clothes and the board?" so they forgot about it until one of the kids found a box. "hey look its old style clothes and a game!" "lets do this!" so they dressed up and started playing , when then one of the guy fixing the kitchen came running tdown the stairs sayin " ITS GONNA BLOW!!" and the gas pipe exploded and the kids died tell me what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deaths Hand Posted August 11, 2005 #2 Share Posted August 11, 2005 ooh thats awesome! i doubt it happened though. cool though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ColdHeartedMonkey Posted August 11, 2005 #3 Share Posted August 11, 2005 Cool twist at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Accident Posted August 12, 2005 Author #4 Share Posted August 12, 2005 no, it didnt happen, i made it up, but legend fits the most Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted August 12, 2005 #5 Share Posted August 12, 2005 Cool story. Kind of reminded me of a story from the Ghostwriter Mysteries. Where the Ghostwriter gang helped a couple kids from the past in solving a mystery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Euphoric Deception Posted August 12, 2005 #6 Share Posted August 12, 2005 So, those three kids from the past died the same way or what? I don't understand the story too well.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moose-Of-Armageddon Posted August 12, 2005 #7 Share Posted August 12, 2005 Ahh, excellent story. Ace twist Let me explain Euphoric. The Mask was actually looking into the futurer to warn them, but the kids, assuming they were from the past, decided to help the people in past by dressing up like them and trying to warn the past. They started playing, and the gasman shouted "IT'S GONNA BLOW!" and the kids died due to misunderstanding. Doubt it could really happen though. How many masks do you have that can see into the future? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodie.Lynne Posted August 12, 2005 #8 Share Posted August 12, 2005 A good effort at story telling, but perhaps it would be better in the Writers and Artists Hangout? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bboy Posted August 12, 2005 #9 Share Posted August 12, 2005 So, those three kids from the past died the same way or what? I don't understand the story too well.. 786018[/snapback] They saw the future.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Accident Posted August 12, 2005 Author #10 Share Posted August 12, 2005 ok maybe i posted it in the wrong section and no its not real Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Big Sea Posted August 14, 2005 #11 Share Posted August 14, 2005 no, it didnt happen, i made it up, but legend fits the most 785521[/snapback] I liked the twist at the end, it's too bad that it's not a real urban myth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrighty Posted August 14, 2005 #12 Share Posted August 14, 2005 Great story and a great ending. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beast_boy Posted August 15, 2005 #13 Share Posted August 15, 2005 that's plagerism... that story was by R.L stine in one of the midnight rooms books or something i remember it as it is one of my favorites. don't pull this crap again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baku Posted August 15, 2005 #14 Share Posted August 15, 2005 for some reason this story really reminds me of evil dead the movie, so very good story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kourui Posted August 15, 2005 #15 Share Posted August 15, 2005 nice one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Accident Posted August 15, 2005 Author #16 Share Posted August 15, 2005 as i said my bro said he made it up so i dont know if sumone wrote the story.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wrighty Posted August 15, 2005 #17 Share Posted August 15, 2005 I hope someone did write it because it is a great story and it would be anoying to find it was all lies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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