Kismit 12,963 #1 Posted October 28, 2003 (edited) Alone...?! Alone I sit. The middle child, often left unseen . Required by my own belief, to sit and feel a senseless grief. Atone a sin that wasn’t mine . Hogswash, Codswollop, Disbelief! There is no sin, there is no grief . This middle childs fine ... I love my spot on the family tree, I see all, yet they don’t see me .. Alone or independent? Which ever way you say it, I love my freedom, liberty. Self-reliance and self-sufficiency. I know I cope, just bring it on. The middle child is seldom wrong. When you’ve spent a lifetime learning views, opposing thoughts whilst catching clues. You tend to be a creative muse, and find the best place for your cues The middle child has a gift, which often goes forgotten . We see both sides, we know the balance, and... we’re not spoiled rotten .. Edited May 15, 2006 by Kismit Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
reese2 1 #2 Posted October 28, 2003 Being a middle child myself, I can relate............ I really liked this one... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Agent_21 3 #3 Posted October 28, 2003 There must be so many things that never make it into books or journals that are worth reading. I like this too. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kira 3 #4 Posted October 28, 2003 Kismit......... wow hun.... And I know another person who would like that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kismit 12,963 #5 Posted October 28, 2003 Awww shux !! Thank you .. it felt good to write something that wasn't all soppy and tears like my angst filled teenage poems , it's even better if you enjoyed them Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kryso 40 #6 Posted October 29, 2003 I’m impressed. Maybe you should think about writing a complete collection. There are a lot of “poets” out there that don’t deserve the paper their poems are wasting. But I believe you have a talent, something you should pursue! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheOracle 79 #7 Posted November 2, 2003 Thanx Kis, I enjoyed your Poem very much and I am looking forward to seeing more of you work . As I read this I could feel the emotions coming out and that is what I think makes a piece of art special. Whether it be written works, music, or visual, the audience should come away feeling affected by it. And I think you acheived that here. Thanx again Sweetheart Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
